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Urban pining...?00:07 Feb 23 2008
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Ocean roars, soaking furs, water trickling from metal rings.
Crew all tied up, the flowing masses frightens them not.
They shout their bravery, and taunt the sky.
They are a force of nature themselves, unstoppable and fierce.
And their dragon plows the sea...
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Joli
00:26 Feb 23 2008
You make me hear the clanking and energy, smell the salt air and the scent of all things nautical. But your dragon plowing the sea...there is an image fit for a Viking, and a girl in New Orleans who loves the occasional peek through your eyes.
Irony
00:31 Feb 23 2008
That is wonderful, it gives me shivers:)
Joli
00:03 Feb 24 2009
You write far too infrequently. But I'll never mind reading your work a second, third, or twentieth time. This is still brilliant.
CTyler
11:04 Feb 24 2009
It's amazing I write at all, really.
I started out downright disgusted with all things poetic. I blame school.
Only somewhere in my early to mid-teens I started experimenting a bit with these things. I think it was due to my rush of interest in symbols and the Haikus that came with my infatuation with Japanese culture.
It's still infrequent for a reason though. It takes alot of effort and inspiration for me to get anything I deem worthy to type down.