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dreams

01:02 Nov 11 2009
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ok so lately ive had some strange dreams that seem like plots for storylines



the most recent dream i had, i was on a tour with an interracial couple with a baby in a building believed to be inhabited and haunted by mutated, violent aggressive subhumans, during the tour, our guide is carried off by the mutants (and we believe he is killed) then the rest of us are nabbed and brought to a man named judgement (and apparently there were no mutants at all, just regular ppl in great disguises) judgement is the ruler of an undeground society devoid of the laws of mainstream living and he decides whether or not we will he survive in his world



apparently these underground ppl were driven to where ever this place and got used to their own way of life and decided to haunt the building made over them



judgement tells the man he wont survive because his attitude reaks of anger and refuses to acknowledge the fact he, his wife and child are unharmed (i am unharmed 2), judgement also goes on 2 say that the women will survive because she is taking everything in, being wary but open minded



this society functions mainly on the rule of, if u take an action, be prepared for consequences



such as if u punch someone in the face, they can shoot u and life will go on



so if i were to write this into a story, there a few driving plots im considering



1. see how the ppl adjust to this new way of life and follow their journey



2. write about how they escape using what they learn from judgement



3. watch them turn this place on its heels



im also open to ideas or thoughts if anyone has any critiques


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bellasiren
bellasiren
14:15 Nov 19 2009

All 3 could be used for separate storys i feel any way would show there journey ..I enjoyed it and Would deffo buy the book if it was realeased





XokiNX
XokiNX
06:49 Dec 23 2009

I think it would be interesting to find out what would happen in each. Take the time to write on all three, decide which one you like the best.



If you can't decide, pick a few friends, have them read each, then have them choose.






TwiztedTemptation
TwiztedTemptation
00:10 Feb 05 2010

i like the ideas you have ^_^





bloodtherstybitch
bloodtherstybitch
03:18 Feb 08 2010

i would defenatly use the first one





LadyKrystalynDarkstar
LadyKrystalynDarkstar
02:31 Feb 09 2010

I like the idea of #1 too, but incorporate the rest of them too.





littlemissmademoiselle
littlemissmademoiselle
12:25 Feb 27 2010

very interesting, i love your interpretation. dreams are a different and personal experience for everybody, i guess only you can really understand your own subconscience.





xRoguex
xRoguex
07:07 Mar 02 2010

It all sounds great to me hun, just follow your instincts and write what you feel is right.








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