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"WITH THE LIGHTS OUT"

19:39 Mar 05 2013
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The funeral and the fuckers that laugh

The end of the better half

Look at me before I beat your face

Brutal, Broken and fallen from grace



You think it's funny

I say a name

It's never the same

Without you...

Without you



The ache and the end of the world crumbling

I just want to ask God if he's having trouble cuming

That bitch slap from the sky leaving you hallow

Raped and beautiful in this position when you swallow



I kiss enough ass and smile

Walking wounded for a mile

She's there outside with a kiss

Telling me tales of Love I miss



There is nothing but several broken souls

I know because I've fallen into it's holes

I am ugly hell and made in his image

I am gross and spiting out verbal sewage



You think it's funny

I hear a name

It's never the same

Without you...

Without you



And now we begin

Born from original sin

An apple and snake skin

And I wonder what the hell happend



Goodbye to everything

The fuckers that laugh

Look at me before I start your blood bath

And sit back with a smoke in your aftermath



Smile and sit pretty

Try not take your own life

Leave a daughter or wife

Smile and take pity



You think it's funny

I knew a name but

It's never the same

Without you...

Without you.

COMMENTS

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VampireLily
VampireLily
14:00 May 30 2013

Brutal, raw.........in other words, everything it should be.



i like the blunt language, the rhythm and grind of it. It's fabulous.... i read it twice~





Dragonrouge
Dragonrouge
09:02 Jul 01 2013

Good for an MTV music video but lacks in metaphors. Still the mood is transmitted to the reader and is dark and disgusted and powerful and that`s good. You can do better.








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