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This is the first chapter to a book I am working on. Pleases tell me what you think.

19:22 Jul 31 2008
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Book of Vampires

Book 1



The Past

Chapter1



Most people say things like vampires, werewolves, demons, witches, and much more only wonder around the shadows or at night. The truth is that we don’t we wonder around, do jobs, and everything people do as well. Some day we hope that everybody will never know who or what we are, or that we even exist at all. For now we try our best to hide every single one of our type.



There is one group of mixed clans that want all of Katonx1 (the whole planet) to know. Their main goal is to get the main land of trade and life (Narvam2) to believe in all of us fully. They think by doing this we can be free. Ha I laugh at that.



These days we have to be careful of what we say and whom we talk to. For now we wait and hide. I am an assassin I’m almost always hired to go kill or hurt someone. I also am hiding my identity more than other’s because I am their spy. I pretend to be in the Tramore3 clan (the clan that plans to set us free). My name is Narconia.



I have been in this clan ever since I was 4 years

old (16 years hiding my true identity). My real clan is the on and only clan that has the most dangerous of us all. They say my family was the most dangerous and I am the last one as far as I know.



When I am not at the tramore home base or sleeping area. I am usually at my family’s house, or on a mission, or at my real home base.

Sometimes I even try to see if I actually have any family left. They say I have a young family member, and maybe an older one but I think the older one is dead.



The Nosferatu4 clan (my home clan5) that I would know my family members from others because they prefer violence. The DNA analyzer said she thinks I might be the one that was the experiment to see if super vampires could be created (hybrids/demon hybrids). She was to tell anyone the creation died. I think she’s right because I am the only one that has been an assassin for 10 years (ever since my family was murdered by me but they don’t know).

I have managed to get both of the clans to let me go for around 6 months. So now all I have to do is try to find something to go off of to try and find my remaining family. Off I go to find my family.









1.Katonx- is the whole planet. We are located in the Kavax galaxy. We are also the strongest planet. All the planets are also populated.

2. Narvam- is the main land of trade and life. It is also where I live currently.

3.Tramore-a clan of pure evil that plans to stop a so-called prophesies.

4.Nosferatu-a clan of the strongest warriors and bloodlines. We are almost never bothered.

5.the Nosferatu clan- is not my real home clan. It is just the clan that I grew up in. after I killed my family they found me and raised me.


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drewlester
drewlester
17:43 Oct 19 2008

nicely typed and thought out and if i could rate it i'd give it a ten.





venumstings
venumstings
19:31 May 07 2009

Beautiful most...



I loved This. Eager to look other chapters too. Please carry on this novel...








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