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Farewell

14:15 Jul 03 2014
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Im here for you but you cannot see me..

I comfort but you do not hear me

I listen but you cannot tell me

I look around

see whispeing into others ears

Im here but why am i turned away

My hands held out as you fall

but you do not grab it

A faraway memory i seem to be..pushed aside for the comfort of another

Into the shadows

i fade being consumed

filled with emptiness dancing around filling me..

exposing my darkest desire and thought.



My heart stops turning cold and black

Arousing need

lust sweeps through me

Your heart skips a beat

terror filling you to erratic

Your blood draining from your face

i move tword you

Your scent is intoxicating

making my need turn to hunger and thirst



Transfixed within my eyes

unable to move as i close in

My pale skin gleaming in the moonlight..

my movements graceful and perfect. Im upon you my lips to your ear

my breath soft and cold quickly becoming fast and heavy

my fangs grazing your throat



Tilting your head slowly up and to the side

you close your eyes lost in my embrace

i sink my fangs slowly in

You utter a low moan

your eyes flutter closed



From you i take your life force

your will

Your heart slows the rythmic beat heavy and fading

It stops

Limp you fall to the ground

upon your lips i kiss and whisper farewell.

COMMENTS

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MrUnashamed
MrUnashamed
21:40 Jul 16 2014

aside from a few spelling bits, you write with good flow, eerie atmosphere and a creepy tone.



crazy good








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