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Essence Of Doom "Poem Writen by me" (Age 15)

00:55 Jan 21 2012
Times Read: 543


Lights are darkened in pretty skies



Blood is shattered upon who disguise



Erlik's inferno is starting to rise



God's angels have drowned me with cries







Where are you, savior ? tell us where to hide!



This army is stronger than our prayings with pride







Your laughing at us with your crucified joke



But I will be there when u finally choke







Death and rape wont end soon



Just wait till Satan steers the spoon







Mortals who prayed for Jesus are cursing his name



He didn't even let them down , he was part of this game







The skies have opened while he looked to the ground



Started pissing on everyone around







The story is not done for there will always be sorcery



Now the dead have risen to wake up in misery







Not long before they are deeply tortured



Remembering all those years when they were happily humbled







Now that we all have seen reality in this gloom



I now accept the glory of the essence of doom


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queennightwalkerbloodlust
queennightwalkerbloodlust
02:13 Jan 22 2012

Equally wow very good no wait it is fantastic





LadyxShadow
LadyxShadow
02:15 Jan 25 2012

Very Nice!





Zilaheteb
Zilaheteb
09:57 Jan 25 2012

Nice confliction



 

The Last Defeat "Poem Writen by me" (Age 14)

00:53 Jan 21 2012
Times Read: 544


Confusion surround me today



I remembered how Gangrel's pain faded away



When Satan stood in his way



So I chose to end my life on the same tray







The forgotten souls were loudly screaming



When the doors of the underworld were sealing



Deep down they all knew what was coming



Rape, fear and infinite suffering







Satan clapped his horns and shouted



But sounds of mercy kept him jaded







God sent his angels to keep me healed



Because this fight was what he feared







My powers vanished in his crack



When he made his first attack







I pulled my strength and fought



With every single breath that i hold







But my boost was never good enough



Since his burning shield was too tough







He came near to end what i started



My hopes died and were uncharted







He chose to end my misery slowly



So his whores can watch clearly







But they never knew that he was a prey



And that he should've killed me right away







My prayings were finally accepted



And allies came for my aid



It wasn't god who had helped



But it was a new army that i made







I murdered Satan and took his place



And none will see any bit of his trace


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queennightwalkerbloodlust
queennightwalkerbloodlust
02:13 Jan 22 2012

Wow wow wow wow fantastic!!!!!








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