.
VR
mtsoul77's Journal


mtsoul77's Journal

THIS JOURNAL IS ON 22 FAVORITE JOURNAL LISTS

Honor: 0    [ Give / Take ]

PROFILE




1 entry this month
 

00:35 Mar 14 2009
Times Read: 1,083


My newest poem, as yet untitled. It's way outside of my typical comfort zone for writing, but I need to expand my horizons. I've been told that it works as a whole, but that it should have been written in first person. I didn't see it in first person though, so that's not how it got written. Anyway, on to the poem...





As your hand slips between her thighs,

A burning lust fills her eyes.

Fingers searching, delving deep,

Back and forth, a frantic sweep.

From parted lips comes gasping breath,

Waiting for the little death.


COMMENTS

-






COMPANY
REQUEST HELP
CONTACT US
SITEMAP
REPORT A BUG
UPDATES
LEGAL
TERMS OF SERVICE
PRIVACY POLICY
DMCA POLICY
REAL VAMPIRES LOVE VAMPIRE RAVE
© 2004 - 2024 Vampire Rave
All Rights Reserved.
Vampire Rave is a member of 
Page generated in 0.0547 seconds.
X
Username:

Password:
I agree to Vampire Rave's Privacy Policy.
I agree to Vampire Rave's Terms of Service.
I agree to Vampire Rave's DMCA Policy.
I agree to Vampire Rave's use of Cookies.
•  SIGN UP •  GET PASSWORD •  GET USERNAME  •
X