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The death

16:41 Dec 05 2012
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She walked along a midnight path

Her own destined displayed out in front of her

Knowing that she should not know but she couldnt help from looking

Caught in the web of life she felt her life line draining

Down to the ground fell her crown and up her spirit lifted.

She lay on the frozen ground noone around to hear the cry

In the morning they found her gone

When they found her body it was frozen and blue

They cried the tears and wished they had know sooner

But alsa you cannot change time and so they buried her

Her lover came back from sea to hear the terrible news

He cried out his tears then layed down at her side and soon his heart beat dimmed too.


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SethAdoni
SethAdoni
23:38 Dec 06 2012

Very Good.

Keep up the awseome work.

Please post more of your poetry!








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