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Stay Far Away

18:29 Dec 28 2008
Times Read: 570


Something is coming to an end



The beauty is being taken bit by bit



The love that I once welcomed with open arms



Is ceising to fill my soul



and I feel like I'm comitting the greatest sin







I'm condemned to Hell and I'm being eaten Alive



By this monster that's consuming my Empty corpse







Stay Far Away



you'll only make this worse



So if you come near



This Monster will be set loose



And will kill you too







Tricked into this doom



I shred my skin in attempt to break free



The time has come



and Now I'm not even human







Goodbye to my soul







My Predator eyes watch this surrounding Fire



Within the Fire I see my love ones die



and Fall into the dark



As they try to save my soul







I don't make a sound



and my Tears don't fall



Listen to this silent Plea







Stay Far away



you'll only make this worse



So if you come near



This Monster will be set loose



and will kill you too













This is A Destined Curse



And wasn't ment for you



So Stay Far away



Listen to this plea







Stay Far away



You'll only make this worse



So If you come near



This Monster will be set loose



and will Kill you too







Stay Far away







Stay Far Away. .

~DevilsGirl~


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JGPOLGOH
JGPOLGOH
23:33 Jan 07 2009

its very well written. very strong words. definetely laudable.



good job.





 

Dont you see

02:36 Dec 28 2008
Times Read: 577


You mean everything, dont you see?



Everytime I see you



I watch you laugh



dont you see?



I'm such a fool for you



I will do Anything you ask,



Just to be rewarded with your kiss







and when you say "I love you"



I can feel your empty words



rip my heart



but I dont care



because



I love you too







Dont you see? I'm losing it



To scared to seek you out



But I'm here, anytime you need me



and I need you too



please, dont you see?



I want more



I want to be closer to you



but I need you to reach out your hand to me



because I'm afraid



Afraid to love


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GobletOfBlood
GobletOfBlood
13:52 Dec 28 2008

lovely poem... yea, I feel the same sometimes...





JGPOLGOH
JGPOLGOH
23:35 Jan 07 2009

wow. that one touched my soul.

not many can do that to me. very, VERY well written.

i can see where your inspiration comes from.

that is a good sign.



who says you don't have skills?



where are the ones who call you unworthy?

i see none.








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