This is a journal entry I've written for my composition class. It's in the tone or voice of someone else. I chose to do the voices of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde. Story 1 – Trapped in a civilized body He trots up the steps of his manor home, straightening his cravat and cuff links. He’s so neat and proper… such a gentleman. Groan. It’s so disgusting, how boring. Even now he pecks his wife on the cheek, you should just give her a good squeeze on the arse, you fool. I’d pinch her flesh until it’s red and swollen. But Mr. Civilized over there would never do that to his darling wife. He slides past his precious wife and enters the laboratory, humph, scientists. They’re either all logical, or completely impractical. Except for me, of course. I’m the enigma. I’m going to change everything. Mr. Civilized lopes down the stairs of his laboratory, grabs his notes and starts to check his concoctions. Bubble bubble, plop plop. I could just boil water to get that effect, stupid idiot. That was harsh of me. You’re an imbecile… idiots around the world would be offended. Ah, what do we have here? He picks up a purple potion, looking at it through the candle light. Why don’t you add it to that green one? He starts to grab the green potion. No, wait. He stops and looks at the green potion, slightly confused. The red one is better, I helped with that one. He sets the green potion down and picks up the red one. Then carefully pours it in with the purple one. Good, good. Now… drink it. He stares at the potion and then starts to move it towards his lips, than stops and draws it back, staring at the red liquid. Drink it Mr. Civilized, that’s a special concoction we created together. His hand starts to shake, but he moves it to his mouth. He tips it back and drinks the red potion. Ah, good. Now let’s see if I can come out and play. I laugh in triumph. Our throat closes off and we fall down in agony. Then everything swirls together and all goes black. Story 2 – Madness I feel the pain, the burning pain, the agony, and the rage. How did I come to feel so much rage? Why am I moving? I should be lying down in bed, being taken care of by my lovely wife. She always does that when I’m sick. She gives me a cold compress and some warm soup. But I’m moving. Where am I going? I’m outside; it seems to be the middle of the night. I can see the stars twinkling above me. But I’m moving with a purpose. Like I forgot to do something and need to hurry. I can’t see clearly either, my vision keeps flashing. First black, then white… now red. It’s almost as if I’m walking down a busy street with lots of flashing lights. But this street is dark and deserted. The buildings flash by me, one by one. All the buildings are dark, lonely and closed off to me. I need help, but I can’t seem to control myself. It’s like there’s another person in my body, moving for me. But that can’t be possible, can it? What was the last thing I did, anyway? I can’t seem to remember that either. Oh the pain, the rage. A woman… a whore steps out of the alley and smiles at me. I try to tell her to go away, that I’m sick and she should stay away. But my body is not mine. Instead I get gruesome pictures flashing through my head. Things that I’d never thought of before. I’m shocked. She steps closer and I try to turn, to run. But instead I step forward, her smile widens. I step closer and closer, my vision becoming worse until I’m falling. Falling through the blackness, where the pain and rage is gone. I wake up the next morning, lying on my laboratory floor. Later I see the news in the newspaper. Everyone is talking about it. The woman was killed by a savage. Was it me? Was it truly me, something deep down inside that I didn’t know existed? What will I do now?
I enter the house through the open garage door, often left open when they’re expecting visitors. I walk into the kitchen and the scent of chicken wafts over me making me breathe in deeply. I savor the rich aroma of the chicken and spices.
“Something smells good,” I say as I walk through the kitchen and into the dining room, moving straight through to the living room. Nancy is sitting in her favorite blue recliner, a pillow wedged on either side of her hips. The pillows bulge out, plain and white with no pillow cases. Her scars are noticeable, a dark angry pink against her fairer skin. Nancy is what you’d call an obese person through genetics. She’s short and round. Her hair is graying but looks as though it used to be black, but I believe she was once a brunette. She’s wearing an orange tank top and blue jean shorts.
“Chicken broth,” Storm shouts from the other room. She’s Nancy’s daughter, age 25.
“I’m cheating,” Nancy admits with some glee. “We went to a staff party last night and we were loaded with leftovers.”
“Cheating?” I tilt my head to the side, watching her eat what appears to be chicken while she hunches over a TV tray.
“I’m supposed to be on a low fat diet. Actually a no fat diet, but that’s almost impossible. My dietitian hasn’t mailed me the list yet, so I’m taking the chance to eat what I want to.” Nancy recently had surgery to remove the lymph nodes in her neck. About three years ago they removed her thyroid glands. All due to cancerous cells found in her neck. She’s also had a hysterectomy because of a few cancerous cells found there. Now she’s preparing to undergo radioactive iodine treatment. After this diet she’ll go on a no iodine diet, which will leave any lingering thyroid cells starving for iodine. So when she gets the radioactive iodine treatment the cells will suck it up and be killed off.
I drop my book bag onto the floor next to the couch and sit down glancing at the TV. Stargate SG-1 is on the sci-fi channel. The glow from the TV is almost the only light entering the room. The windows are open, but the drapes are pulled closed, giving the room a cave type feeling. If the front door wasn’t open I’d start to feel slightly claustrophobic.
Storm comes into the room and sits on the opposite end of the couch, turning to the TV tray next to her, where her laptop is set up, and continues to play a game. It involves a thin path and a monolith you can rotate around. I look back over to Nancy.
“What are you eating?” I ask, thinking that her chicken must be very tender to fall apart the way it is.
“Pulled pork,” she answers, pulling it apart and eating it, “from Jimmy Johns.” I wrinkle my eye brows trying to figure out how I could have confused it with chicken, but then forget about it as Storm starts moving the monolith around and separates it into two smaller pieces.
“That’s an interesting game,” I comment while watching as the monolith falls off one of the many edges. Storm swears and restarts the game.
“I’ve got to get from point A to point B, without falling off the edge. It’s called Bloxorz. I’m addicted,” she mutters as she continues to navigate around the tight corners. I watch her for awhile. Then lose interest and look around the room.
The living room is large with the couch and recliner facing their opulent TV stand. It’s covered with nick knacks, a lot of which are Storm’s frog collecting items. There are frog statues, cards, and a cell phone holder to name a few. Lined at the top of the TV stand are Storm’s frog stuffed animals, one of which I gave her. It’s a puppet and will croak when you open its mouth. She loves it.
Just above the TV on a separate shelf is their collection of Lord of the Rings items. They have the books, and little statues of swords and castles. Nancy and Storm are big fans of Lord of the Rings. There’s even a little creepy statue of Golem. They have the movies centered there as well. We had a marathon a while back; it took forever to watch it all. People don’t get that Sam’s the real hero of the movie until the ending.
“Oh.” I say glancing at my watch. “Wow.” I mutter grabbing my book bag. “I need to get going. Let me know if you need anything. Or need help with anything.” I offer, walking towards the door.
“Aright, see you later.” Nancy yells after me as I walk out the door with a wave.
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