Death (of me)
I die today
Goodbye I say
It must be this way
This is my final statement
I give my body to the Earth
I give my fluids to the Oceans
I give my fire to the Suns
I give my breath to the Clouds
because I die today
I give my money away
to those who are in need,
I let my music play
to those who want to hear,
I write my words this way
to those who want to read,
I give my thoughts to those
who still want to think,
because I die today...
I leave my work to be continued
I continue my work to be finished
I finish my work to be applied
I apply my work to finally die
because it must be this way...
Bones smash on the rocks
Blood flows in the streams
Breath goes back into the air
Ashes fly away with the winds
Life goes back to the stars
This is the way I died.
COMMENTS
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slipmagg01
19:28 Mar 10 2013
I enjoyed this poem so very much
It is clean, deep and lots of imagery, it shows the beauty of death and what can come of death.
This is very good work !
Good job my dear brother. (:
Seidr
19:40 Mar 10 2013
Thank you dear sister, I'm glad you liked it. :)
I still feel it could be refined even more... but then I always feel that about anything I do or write.
VvvVampireKisses
19:51 Mar 10 2013
wow... very impressive
Angelus
00:43 Mar 11 2013
dead sound, I like it
Seidr
11:38 Mar 11 2013
VK and Angelus thank you very much !
LadyBianca
16:20 Mar 13 2013
this is very good full of emotion and very deep.... Don't change it leave it as it is :)
Seidr
16:26 Mar 13 2013
Thank you LadyB. I'll leave it as it is ;)
lordess
03:56 Jun 29 2013
Very descriptive! Filled with Life for a poem on Death! Nice... :)