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Death (of me)

15:54 Mar 10 2013
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Death (of me)



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I die today

Goodbye I say

It must be this way

This is my final statement



I give my body to the Earth

I give my fluids to the Oceans

I give my fire to the Suns

I give my breath to the Clouds

because I die today



I give my money away

to those who are in need,

I let my music play

to those who want to hear,

I write my words this way

to those who want to read,

I give my thoughts to those

who still want to think,

because I die today...



I leave my work to be continued

I continue my work to be finished

I finish my work to be applied

I apply my work to finally die

because it must be this way...



Bones smash on the rocks

Blood flows in the streams

Breath goes back into the air

Ashes fly away with the winds

Life goes back to the stars

This is the way I died.




COMMENTS

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slipmagg01
slipmagg01
19:28 Mar 10 2013

I enjoyed this poem so very much

It is clean, deep and lots of imagery, it shows the beauty of death and what can come of death.

This is very good work !

Good job my dear brother. (:





Seidr
Seidr
19:40 Mar 10 2013

Thank you dear sister, I'm glad you liked it. :)



I still feel it could be refined even more... but then I always feel that about anything I do or write.





VvvVampireKisses
VvvVampireKisses
19:51 Mar 10 2013

wow... very impressive





Angelus
Angelus
00:43 Mar 11 2013

dead sound, I like it





Seidr
Seidr
11:38 Mar 11 2013

VK and Angelus thank you very much !





LadyBianca
LadyBianca
16:20 Mar 13 2013

this is very good full of emotion and very deep.... Don't change it leave it as it is :)





Seidr
Seidr
16:26 Mar 13 2013

Thank you LadyB. I'll leave it as it is ;)





lordess
lordess
03:56 Jun 29 2013

Very descriptive! Filled with Life for a poem on Death! Nice... :)








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