He is the one I dream about.
The one I think about.
The one I want to talk to when I’m down.
The one I want to run to when I need a shoulder to cry on.
He believes in me even though I don’t.
He can pick me up when no one else can.
But he isn’t meant for me!
He makes me feel like I’m worth something.
I can talk to him about anything & he is always there for me.
We have fun together & enjoy each other’s company.
But he isn’t meant for me!
One day I hope to be the person he sees.
I can’t imagine life without him.
But he isn’t meant for me!!!!!!
Written by Cher Elzy
The world is crushing me
I can’t breath
Do I want to?
A piece of my heart is broken
There’s no mending it
But do I want to?
All I see is the darkness now
No way to let the light in
Do I want to?
Misery is my company
There is no way to make it leave
But do I want to?
My mind is spinning
Can’t make any sense out of it all
Do I want to?
I feel so empty inside
And I don’t see anyway to fill the void
But do I want to?
The pain is getting to be too much
People say it will get better
Do I want it to?
I love you so much
There is no changing that
But do I want to?
The answers are no
So how do I go on?
I don’t know but for you I will
Written by Cher Elzy
COMMENTS
This Cher Elzy seems a little depressed.
I wrote this when I was going through a tough spell
Once again. your use of repetition is spot on. Good job.
COMMENTS
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food4thought
20:31 Feb 27 2010
Very well done. I like the way you use repetition so effectively.