Temptation is fun, Giving in is Even Better (Chapter One)02:35 Mar 11 2008
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Chapter One (The Beginning)
You were known as the "goth princess" as people would often call you in the junior hallway of Anderson high. Your
amazing beauty was questioned by passing whispers, since you seemed to dress black every day. Your mother had recently
abandoned you and gave you about 1,000 dollars child support, and trust issues to live on. You had
a nice job at Hot Topic paying roughly $8.50 an hour. A fairly nice apartment you owned in your name as well. You loved your home like it was the only thing that mattered..and basically.. it did. It seemed like no one completely understood you, and It was true.
Your state of mind differed greatly from others. Rare was it to find someone who could keep you mentally stimulated in any type of conversation. The town you lived in was seldom full of people. The only thing entertaining in this town was a mini mall, in which guys and girls would go to hang out. Every guy in that town was so simple minded
and not your typ so you remained single and preoccupied. Other than that, your overall personality was outgoing, intelligent, creative, and entertaining. Mysterious, and shy at times, you were very fun to hang around with when people got to know you better. You had one true friend, and his name was Devian. He has so much in common with you, it scares you sometimes.
He was alone as well in life, wondering aimlessely in this unmotivated and cold world. He had his
own home somewhere that you have never been too, and it made you uncomfortable at times, since you two have been friends for seven years. He had midnight black hair and stunning green/blue eyes that seemed to change color with his mood. He was very fit and pale, regardless of his lazy spells.He was quite the character.
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"OMFG!" You heard Devian's masculine voice ring through your ears.Devian tackled you from behind. "OMG! WHAT!?" You flipped out and screamed. It was the end of the day at school, and you were just unlocking your solid black
dodge charger. " BOO!' He said exagerating the small word. You sighed and smacked his head. " DONT SCARE ME YOU SPAZZ!"
You let out a long sigh and began to giggle.
He smirked and asked if you wanted to go chill at the Hub tonight. The Hub was a comfortble cafe that you and Devian would go to almost daily. You nodded and smiled thinking about the lovely enviornment of the cafe. You were off
for the day at work, and you were ready to relax and enjoy time with your best freind.
He hopped into his crimson red
mustang and burned out of the school parking lot. You rolled your eyes, laughed
at his stupidity, and got into your car. You immediately began blasting the radio to your favorite band and drove to the middle of the city where the Hub was located.
Devian was already
leaning against the brick wall of the building behind his car. You honked at him and followed the smirk dancing on his lips. You parked gracefully and opened the doors to the lovely
cafe. Devian was oddly already there at a table. * He simply amazes me with his sneaky wit* You smirked and thought to yourself. He already ordered your favorite cheesecake
and coffee. "By the look on your face I see your pleased with my order" He stuck his tounge out as you sat down silently. " You wish!" You smiled. He chuckled and began digging in to his
supreme cheese cake topped with extra whipped cream and straw berries. * I just dont see how he keeps it all down..*
You stared with amazement. He noticed your utter stare, and returned your stare
with a mouth full of food. " Look.. I know I'm pretty but GOD! Don't gawk at me" He smiled a dorky smile. You wrinkled your face in disgust. " You scare me to extremes sometimes.." you stated as you gave him an
amused look.
After about two hours of long conversations concerning school and random subjects, you were stuffed full and tired. You said your good byes to Devian and headed to your car. It was about 9:00
and the parking lot had never been so empty on a week night. You sighed in releif as you noticed it wasn't very late.
For a Thursday night, you were oddly tired. * Wow I'm beat..*
As you started to unlock the car door, you saw a dark figure in the reflection of your car window. You gasped and immediately turned around. Nothing was there * okay.. I must be reeaaally exhausted..*
You reassured yourself and very quickly got into your car and drove off. " Holy shit that was weird" You said to yourself aloud. After about 15 minutes, you finally arrived at your home. Still in deep thought,
you didn't really pay attention to who was out and about around the building.
About three feet next to your door was a tall man just leaning against the wall, wearing a trench coat.
You ignored his prescence and unlocked your apartment door. Your apartment was on the top of a two story building. This made you feel more secure about people like him. You slammed the door shut and locked it.
Goose bumps
crawled up your spine and you finally relaxed and leaped on your sofa. You began reading this amazing book about vampires that you have been reading for quite some time. Vampires always intrigued you intensely. Your nerves finally
calmed down as you took a nice warm bubble bath and listened to your fav. band again. You tilted your head back and listened to the sounds of the tiny bubbles popping in your ears.
You giggled a bit and got out.
You wrapped your body in a nice black towel and began drying yourself off. You put your silky crimson red nigh gown on and made your way through your hall
to your master bedroom. As soon as you opened the door.. there was a small breeze that caught your attention. You NEVER leave the windows open. Your heart began to skip a beat as
..yep.. you guessed it.. that tall dark figure stood right in the window.
Your immediate reaction was to scream and
grab the closest object to defend yourself. But before you managed to
even get a peep out of your mouth, the tall figure held u tightly and closed your mouth completely shut. You tried muttering words, but nothing came out. The feeling of the figure hand around your mouth made you furious with growing pride.
Your body was in a full embrace and you were freaking out inside * OMG! WTF?!* you were screaming inside your head. Your ears perked as a sound came from the figure.. " ShHhhh.." A smooth voice came out of the figures mouth. You tried staring into his eyes.. but nothing
could be made out.
" My dear.. calm down.. you will not be harmed" You pricked an eyebrow and twitched your leg in attempt to kick him. He tilted his face toward your ear and whispered "All I have come to tell you is..your love awaits." His moist breath made you grit your teeth as you attempted to free yourself again.
With those simple words.. he vanished without a trace. The window was shut as if no one had even opened it. You blinked a couple of times , trying to analyze what had just happened, and ran to your phone to call Devian.
Oddly, he didnt answer. He ALWAYS answered your calls. " okay.. wtf is going on.."
" I'm locking EVERYTHING in this house..and keeping my pistol under my pillow.." You didnt want to deal with the law enforcement.. or leave a reputation that you were crazy, so you didnt call them.
All night you kept thinking about that simple sentence.. * What could that mean?* You constantly questioned your mind.
You got absolutely no sleep all night.
Suddenly..at 6:30 A.M...you heard an all to familiar..
--BEEP--
End Chapter One
COMMENTS
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RenaJade
13:27 Mar 19 2008
Wow! I like the suspence, the goosebumps...Keep up the great work! Looking forward to seeing the next chapter.