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chapter 2 of story

01:18 Jul 31 2012
Times Read: 436


chapter 2:ozzy



The next morning,zane looked out the window sadly and then he turned around and glared at the oher but when he turned back to the window,he saw a man with a gun in his hand.the gun had blood on it and it was out of bullets.the man looked like a 40 year old man.zane went outside and blocked the doorway and asked "who are u and why are u here?" the man stopped then he looked at zane nervously then he went down on his knees and yelled "please,please help me,i need help badly and u are my only hope!" zane walked to the guy slowly then he put a hand on his shoulder then asked "whats your situation?" the man smiled with happiness then he responded "i need to save my daughter ammy,she has been taken by vampires and the vampires took her to a mansion." zane glared at the man's eyes then he smiled weirdly and said in a strong voice "come inside,we will talk in there,its not safe to talk out here." the two men walked in the house and they sat on the floor.the rest of the vampires woke up and looked at the man then got up and glared at him.The man looked at the rest of the people then he smiled and he started to turn cold in his blood.Emily looked at zane and asked "who is this zane,is this breakfast?" zane shook his head and responded "no emily,this is a person who needs our help." lisa closed her eyes then opened them and asked the man "so what the problem?" the man looked at lisa and said in a shy voice "my daughter,she has been kidnapped by a group of vampires and they took her to a mansion, i tried to stop them but they were to fast and i couldnt catch up so i thought i could get some help to get my daughter back so we could live peacefully." the man started crying and he started to cover his face.peter walked to him and he said softly "its alright, we will help u get your daughter back and we will make sure obody hurts u and your daughter." emily asked "whats your daughter's name?" the man answered "ammy" everybody looked at each other then they started to look at the man.the man looked at the vampires and he started shaking rapidly.zane demanded "alright everybody,lets go to this mansion and rescue this girl." everybody nodded then started to get ready.emily yelled "wait,we dont even know where the mansion is or what mansion he talking about!" the man responded "its the cherry mansion" peter said "u mean the abandoned mansion near the river?" the man nodded then he got up and walked outside to the woods and he started to walk in the woods.the vampires followed and then they started to look back and forth.two hours passed and they still wasnt there.peter complained "are we there yet,i mean we have been walking for two hours,you guys should be tired of walking." emily looked at peter then she said "we get there when we get there peter" peter rolled his eyes then he looked back and forth.the gang stopped and they looked at the dark and scary mansion and they walked in the mansion with no fear.the man looked around and started to call his daughter's name and then he stopped for a moment and he saw a shadow.the vampires.



im not done yet but i will be soon


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a story i tried to write

03:53 Jul 29 2012
Times Read: 443


she opens her eyes in pain but she closes them so she doesnt see darkness but she cant run away from the monsters around her.she struggles to get up on her knees with blood dripping on her legs and her hair dirty and wet, but she opens her eyes and sees a dim light flashing back and forth.the only thing she thought about was home and also, hope.



chapter one:emily

the clouds in the sky started to get grey then it started to turn black. Emily looked up and started to cry,then she looked down and screamed in a scared voice.she knew she was in trouble and mostly,in danger.she started to punch the ground and kick the dirt away from her and then she stopped when she heard a voice of help. she looked forward in the darkness and saw that she needed to save the person's life, so she got up and ran to the innocent voice of help and stopped for a second.the scream came from a little girl who was trapped in chains and a chain necklace trying to choke the life out of her.the little girl cried for mercy but emily just stood there and glared at the blood dripping down her neck and hands.she felt her true self trying to escape from the body and suck the blood she smelled from the little girl.the little girl stopped crying and glared at emily in shock then asked in a sweetly voice "can u please help me" emily looked at the girl with fear then responded in a strong voice "why should i help u,u are nothing but a little baby who cant escape from the darkness that lies in u, u dont need my help at all, u just want to eat the lives of people who come here" the little girl smiled then she turned into here true form, her true form was a werewolf.the girl howled for her pack to come then she looked at emily with a smirk on her face then she answered "u are not like the other people,usually they save me and they get killed,but you, you are nothing but an outsider.you are a person who saves humns, i never seen a vampire who does that. so is it true?" emily gave the werewolf an anger face then said "is what true?" the werewolf laughed at emily for looking curious and then she said in a funny voice "im surprise, u dont even know what you are doing. u dont even remember who u are." emily yelled "i do remember who i am, what do u think i am?" the werewolf gave emily a grin then she said evily "u r a vampire, a vampire who betrays your own kind and saves other people's life, i thought u would know what u r but it seems i have to show u who u r so u can remember" emily sat down on her knees then gently laughed then she smiled and answered "i know eactly what i am,do u think im stupid or do u think that i am scared of u,go ahead and show me what i am, its not like i will not beat the crap out of u so go ahead." the werewolf growled then yelled in anger "you are really trying my patients, i should destroy u and make sure u take back what u said" emily looked at the werewolf evily then it became silence for a few minutes then out of nowhere emily smiled then responded "bring it on" the werewolf broke out of the chains and ran full speed to emily and started growling.emily got up and waited for the werewolf to come closer and started to jump over the werewolf.the werewolf ran faster to emily then she bite her leg.emily yelled for help but nobody can hear her then she said in her mind "is it really over?" then she kicked the werewolf in the face to make the wolf fly high i the sky.the werewolf yelped in pain and fell on the ground. the two enemies got up and looked at each other.their skin was bloody nd their eyes was glaring at each other with death and pride. the two stood there waiting for one to attack but out of nowhere, the pack of wolves was behind emily and they started to attack her.emily tried to fight the pack of wolves but she had no more strength left, but until she was done for, a group of vampires came in the fight and they started to get the wolves off of emily.emily looked at the vampires and she knew who they was.the leader,zane was the strongest.the second strongest was lisa,the third nd second youngest was layla,and last it was peter.emily smiled at them and said in joy "thanks, i knew u guys would come,u always do" zane grinned then said "yeah,well u need to stop picking fights." emily sighed then she got up. layla yelled "come on,there is to many of them, we have to go now!" zne nodded "your right 7 vs 5 is not the right thing to do, but dont worry, we will be back" the five vampires flew in the sky and landed in front of an abandoned house then they went in and sat on the floor. the house was dark and it had lots of bats and mice in there.layla looked at emily then asked "why did u run off, u know the rules when it comes to running off" emily nodded then she responded "i wasnt running off, i saw a dim light" layla yelled "and u followed it,emily, u know what its like to get captured and be in those tortured labs?!" zane looked at layla then said "quiet, u dont know what could be in here, we dont even know if this house is abandoned." peter looked around then he smiled then said "beats me, this might be a zoo for all i care,i mean look at all these animals, they are partyig like no tomorrow" everybody laughed then they started to laugh in joy then zane looked at everybody then he demanded "tomorrow we are all going to those labs to destroy them and make sure they dont ever mess with the vampires" everybody looked at zane shocked then lisa yelled "zane are u crazy,are u trying to get us killed, i mean there are so many of them we cant destroy them with just five vampires, we need like a whole army of vampires to destroy the labs!" zane nodded then said "i know, that is why we are going to go to the woods and get ozzy and his gang, i know they will help us." everybody glared at each other then they agreed to zane's plan then they fell to sleep peacefully and waited until the day started.



i might write a chapter two but i want u guys to read this and see if i should write more.=)


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xxfireleafxx
xxfireleafxx
18:22 Aug 01 2012

rawr








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