So far away
in a snowy white winters field
not a single flower does yield
yet beauy here will forever stay
Oh such bliss
this winter kiss
How my heart does race
for that sweet embrace
that we once shared
for no other thing had we cared
just for eachother in that sweet moment
so passionately was it spent
ah such a sweet memory
that of which makes the best a melody.
COMMENTS
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Dragonrouge
13:20 Nov 20 2013
Lovely!
Maybe the second verse would sound better as: "in winter`s field". It does automatically brings in the reader`s mind the whiteness I think.
LaDonna
10:40 Nov 23 2013
very nice....
YourDarKQu33n
17:03 Nov 26 2013
very beautiful. thank you for sharing.
OniAngel
02:55 Dec 23 2013
thats a really beautiful peom