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winter's melody

16:58 Nov 16 2013
Times Read: 373


So far away

in a snowy white winters field

not a single flower does yield

yet beauy here will forever stay



Oh such bliss

this winter kiss



How my heart does race

for that sweet embrace

that we once shared

for no other thing had we cared



just for eachother in that sweet moment

so passionately was it spent



ah such a sweet memory

that of which makes the best a melody.


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Dragonrouge
Dragonrouge
13:20 Nov 20 2013

Lovely!

Maybe the second verse would sound better as: "in winter`s field". It does automatically brings in the reader`s mind the whiteness I think.





LaDonna
LaDonna
10:40 Nov 23 2013

very nice....





YourDarKQu33n
YourDarKQu33n
17:03 Nov 26 2013

very beautiful. thank you for sharing.





OniAngel
OniAngel
02:55 Dec 23 2013

thats a really beautiful peom








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