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Author: Loveevenindeath

She: Run, run through the woods
Puff, puff breathings alight
Its dark, I'm called little red riding hood
Adrenaline, pumping in my veins, fight or flight

He: He comes running after
A knife in one hand
No condom in the other
Here he comes running to fast to stand

Stranger: so very tired
I'm lost in the woods
Lungs on fire
I see little red riding hood

She: legs burning, lungs about to burst
Wet with sweat
I trip head first
Then rock and head soon met

He: running becomes slow
Laughing starts as a chuckle
Crunch, crunch I come close
Sweat comes down, it trickles

Stranger: another is there
Covered in shadows
Moonlight catches on silver
This is not my battle

She: "please," I whisper "spare me"
Voice is horse, breathing fast
My eyes search for help, cant move my feet
Hearts pumping, bleeding fast from my gash

He: the girls plea makes me smile
Coming close, down low for a kiss
Condom free hand travels, it starts to hail
Getting ready for pleasurable bliss

Stranger: I smell it, Like a sweet kiss
My lungs a flaming, becomes unbreable
But her whispered voice, oh sweet bliss
I step away from the tree and walk closer

She: 1 tear, 2 tear
They drip endlessly
Falling, flowing like a river
Awaiting for a miracle, free, painless

He: Hearts pumping
Excitement everywhere
Pants unzipping
Foot steps in the snow, I'm unaware

Stranger: Quieter, quieter
Like a hunter stalking its prey
Closer, closer
Ready to jump, onto who does not lay

She: The weight of him is heavy
Cant change my fear to fury
Wait, I see a shadow coming
It nos animal, its not hairy

He: her expression changed
Theres relief and fear, she looks past me
I see, from the corner of my eye, silver hanging
In someones hand, it is now where I cant see

Stranger: I stand above him
His pride hanging out
About to take hers, she whimpers
She stares at me, wanting to shout

She: I wait for what happens next
Looks like he has noticed
He has stopped, my feet is numb, I try to flex
He is frozen in fear, I could have singed, almost

He: scrambling away from the girl
I face who's behind me
I saw the snarl
The teeth, I screamed

Stranger: He screams like a girl
I smile wide
I grab him and throw
He hit a near by tree, she tries to hide

She: I cower away
He was thrown far from me
I zipped up, lost of what to say
I look up, shocked of what I see

He: head hurting
Neck in searing pain
What is this burning?
Fear rises, pain increases, its all the same

Stranger: Disgusting taste, hes drunk
Oh well, I'll just kill him
Something goes wrong, fuck
He slithers away, I'm to week, my limbs

She: They struggle, I see blood
He slips away from the stranger
He trips the stranger, who falls like a ton
He runs past me, I feel stronger

He: I run past her
She stops me, I trip, I fall again
On top, I'm unzipped maybe just for-
I'm hit, pride is inflamed

Stranger: I watch as she revenges
His pride gone, triumph
He gos limp on her, he surrenders
I walk closer, she cant stand

She: closer and closer stranger comes
What now, its cold, hail is heavy
The snarl is gone
But teeth shines in the moon light beam

Stranger: I'm close now, rip the body off
She lays there, breathing hard
Shes not drunk, pure, shes enough
But as I lean over, that gash's going to be scared

She: I stare at him, shocked
He stares right back, expressionless
He comes, leaning over, breath is hot
I don't know what to do, but I'm painless

Stranger: I stop myself, but she leans forward
"I'm thirsty," cant stop myself, voice is horse
"please, just a little," head lowers
But cant use force

She: "yes," is whisper
Eyes doze over
His hold is warm
Warm in this cold

Stranger: I drink deep
She weakens
I grow strong, in a heap
I must stop, if I kill her, I'll feel sicken

She: he's done
He just holds me
He feels strong
I cant feel my feet, their weak

Stranger: shes tired, I can sense
I pick her up and walk
It was a mile away, the rundown fence
Maybe later we can talk

She: I don't know where we are
But I need sleep
Did I really run this far?
I lay still in his arms, falling into dreams

Stranger: Stopping at the fence, I sit and lean
Shes recovering fast
My teeth are still there, she already seen
Waiting my whole life, it came at last

She: opening my eyes, it shines in the moon
Its bright, I'm warm
I smile and snuggle close, its too cool
But its safer in his arms

Stranger: she whispers in my ear
I whisper back "no problem, thanks"
She smiles, I cant believe this is happening here
I hope, this is not a fluke or flank

Adrenaline never fails
She went from flight to fight
It continued to hail
On her and her guardian of the knight....


Date Added: August 21, 2009
Added By: LoveEvenInDeath
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