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I like it when people genuinely read and comment on my poetry, good bad otherwise it would be nice to hear what other people think.

Same here but I will head over and add my opinions

God make me fearless
and release my rage
let me tear them asunder
let me out of my cage
undo my bindings
and get out of my way
let the rivers run red
let the blood spray
god grant me a kill
for each punch i throw
and bone crunching bliss
in every blow
give me an unstopable will
and an unfailing might
let my enemies fear me
let them run in fright
no human inside me
no rationality in my head
i will hurdle the weak
and i will trample the dead
lord strike me with lightning
when i'm growing weak
and let my words crumble mountains
every time i speak
when the enemy flees
i will intercept
until i'm the last one breathing
i'll deal out death
and at the end of the fight
when i running free
god grant me slumber
and leave me be