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I am a writer, but desperately need some feedback! constructive critism is greatly and definitely appreciated...

I am writing my own novel, so, the comments you make on my writing overall will effect how that turns out as well, though if I hope to get this one published, I am legally forbidden to let the actual novel loose

even if only in my poetry, please take a peek
thank you all and blessed be

Duplicate - you have another thread running asking for views and add.

Thank you.