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You take more than i give,

you push me around as if i was nothing

You look down on me,

can't you see that your tearing my heart apart



Do you even care,

if I was to die?

What would you do,

would you cry?



I cry out for you,

Thinking that you care.

i look up and see your not there

I shed a tear, and know this isn't fair



I try to pretend the pain I feel isn't there,

shove me to the ground once more.

I glance up at you,

you pin my arms to the ground.



You pull out a blade,

it glimmers in the moon light.

frighten i close my eyes,

take one last breath.



I feel it glide across my skin,

As I feel it stop, I open my eyes.

Seeing you being picked up by your neck,

watching you gasp your your final breath



The tall dark figure take your life,

as you thought you was going to take mine.

You lost this game, this war.

This time you took more than you could take



How does it feel?

Do you feel the pain,

I felt, the suffering, the bleeding

The tears i cried, How does it feel now?



**if you see anything that i could do better to fix it or have any comments to make it better let me no i really think its one of my best I've wrote in the past year or so..

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venumstings
05:35 Oct 08 2010

Lovely poem with lovely flow of rhyme.

I loved this poem.

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