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Summer Air

08:28 Sep 05 2009
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As I step outside,

in to the hot air,

it fills my lungs with a burning,

letting me know it's there.



The sun shines down,

raising the heat,

a humid haze beginning to clear,

as the morning sun burns through.



The beading on the grass,

glinting in the sunlight,

the moisture going back up in to the clouds,

preparing itself for the next summer storm.



A thunder rolls the distance,

a flash off to the side,

down comes the new rain of another day,

falling down around in a moisture haze.



It passes by,

the ground again wet,

a new summer air filling the sky,

a new summer air in which to fly.



written by CancerianGryffin 9-5-09


COMMENTS

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Lolita
Lolita
08:56 Sep 05 2009

I like the imagery you create with your words in this poem. My boyfriend just said it reminds him of Australia. :)





TaintedPoison
TaintedPoison
12:59 Sep 06 2009

Very nice darling *hugs*





crimsonxxtears
crimsonxxtears
15:53 Sep 07 2009

Very nice





VampireLover91
VampireLover91
05:17 Oct 12 2009

Very well written...I have enjoyed reading this!





Bijou
Bijou
22:03 Dec 15 2009

very beuatiful








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