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Midnight Kidnapping04:41 Nov 29 2010
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I thought I'd do one more chapter before school swamps me again. :/ Chapter 3 was a disaster sorry guys! I had a lot going on and had to much on my mind so the chapter came out that way. Chapter 4 is better then last one maybe I won't murder another chapter of this story :P but if I do it'll get better
Chapter 5
Trevor plopped down in the chair as Sora left the library to go to bed. She'd questioned him for almost 5 hours about vampires and at time his father had chimed in to correct him or to explain. " She took that better than most humans"his father said putting his book down. " Have you ever met a human that acted like that?" Trevor asked and his father smiled. " No but you may wanna make sure she isn't climbing out her window..... again" his father said grinning as Trevor heard footsteps on the roof. " Go get her" his father ordered. " Why did I get the stubborn human"Trevor grumbled going to catch his oh so needed human.
Sora sat down on the roof and looked up she loved star gazing it was one of her favorite things to do and it helped her think things through. So she was being held captive by vampires because she was Trevor's "Keeper". He never did tell her why that was so important and his father had kept saying that she would understand when the first stage started. Whatever that was. " Stupid human, stupid stupid human" Sora heard Trevor grumble as he inched around the house trim. Well so much for time to herself Sora thought walking along the roof toward her window and lowering herself down onto the window just about hers and continued down till she reached her open window and waited for Trevor to get back.
Trevor stopped as he heard Sora get up and walk back toward the room and climb down and go back inside. Cursing Trevor dropped down to the ground it was easier to just walk. Barging through the door Trevor was about to scream when he discovered she was asleep in the chair by the window. So she knew he had followed her and was waiting for him. Almost instantly he forgot why he was mad at her. She wasn't that bad of a human a bit strange but she was okay.
Sora jolted away when she felt herself being lifted out of the seat. " Easy, I've got you" Trevor said and Sora yawned and glanced at him. "You'd better have a good explanation for climbing out of the window again" Trevor said and Sora smiled. " I think best outside when the stars are out" she yawned and he rolled his eyes. " Your not a prisoner you may leave your room and go where you want as long as it isn't outside the fence surrounding the house unless I'm with you" Trevor said putting her on the bed. " Now go to sleep we will talk more in the morning about what the first stage is so you don't freak out when it happens" Trevor said pecking her on the cheek and leaving the room.
Rubbing her cheek Sora pulled the covers over her head and let sleep claim her she didn't know what the first stage was but she'd stick around heck if she didn't like the whole Keeper thing she could just climb out the window and make a run for it.
Trevor sighed as he let the servant go. He hated feeding on them but when he had to watch Sora almost 24/7 it made it hard to go out and feed. " So I see you avoided telling her that she not only had a vampire in the family tree but you also failed to ask if she had the family mark as a birthmark. She may seem like a Keeper but she may just be stronger in the mind then any human you've encountered" his father said leaning against the wall. " She doesn't trust me and you know as well I do that birthmarks can be in personal areas and humans tend to be shy" Trevor snapped just thinking about Sora not being a Keeper made his skin crawl he'd brought her here thinking she could prevent his 100th birthday ceremony from taking place, but if she wasn't his Keeper she'd become the human in the ceremony. " Tomorrow you WILL find out for sure if she is your Keeper, or I will do it myself" his father warned.
Trevor went to his room if only he had gone to the city in the first place maybe he could avoid the sense of dread starting to over power his senses. Tomorrow he'd have to either find the family mark or have her pay the consequences of his mistake.
*Authors Note*- So far so good sorry to drop it off here, but I had to keep it interesting and I added a twist to it. :P I know what I'm gonna but you don't, so has Trevor found his Keeper or has he just cause a human to lose her freedom? Guess you'll have to wait to find out( I know this chapter is short but it's late at night here I've gotta get to bed promise next chapter will be longer!)
Midnight Kidnapping02:03 Nov 24 2010
Times Read: 470
:/ idk what to think about chapter 3 but this is my for fun story so I'm just gonna go on with what I've already done. I know I don't separate my paragraphs but these are quick chapters off the top of my head so I do what I can and I'll edit later if I have the time. Right now I have time to type it but not correct.
Chapter 4
Sora rolled over onto her side her head was killing her. Sitting up Sora felt her heart skip a beat this was not the attic and this was not Remy's house by any means if anything this one room was half of Remy's house. " Oh! Master Trevor said you would awaken soon. My name is Kai is there anything I can get for you?" she asked and Sora closed her eyes. This was all just a dream she just hit her head and this was some twisted dream. Or at least she hoped it was a dream
" Umm I hate to burst your bubble but this isn't a dream. Master Trevor brought you here because you are his Keeper" Kia said handing her a glass of water and two pills Sora hoped was for pain. " No you didn't say that outloud I can read or hear thoughts, that's why they keep my here I'm basically their lie detector and I help keep the other slaves in line" she continued on . " Master Trevor will be here shortly to explain what a Keeper is just stay here and rest" she said leaving Sora to her thoughts.
"It's okay Sora don't panic some mad man just kidnapped you from your home and thinks that your his "Keeper" whatever the hell that is" Sora said pacing the room. "Okay just think...."
Sora said
Looking around the room Sora saw a window. Perfect if she could climb down before anyone noticed. Opening the window Sora saw that she was about as high up as the attic. " Okay just don't look down" Sora said edging herself out the window and onto the concrete ledge below." Just don't look down, just don't look down, just don't look..." Sora chanted walking along the edge toward the tree at the corner of the huge house.
" What the hell are you doing?!?" Trevor yelled spotting the girl sitting in the only tree by the house. " Are you crazy your gonna break your neck!" Trevor yelled storming toward the tree. " Well crap" she said glancing down at him. "Trevor what is going on?" his father said joining him outside. " I seemed to have got a little escape artist" Trevor growled as he watched the girl lean against the truck of the tree. " Get down here now" Trevor ordered. " I already tried that smart one" she snapped back and his father just chuckled. " Good luck getting her down" his father said going back inside
Trevor cursed and glared at his father back what happened to she was important to the blood line crap he'd said before. " Will you please come down so we can talk?" Trevor asked as nicely as possible. " Hmmm let me think about that..NO!" she snapped crossing her arms. " Fine! I'm getting the ladder" Trevor said storming off.
Sora smiled. Men were so easy to lose thier tempers. Starting to climb down Sora sighed as she felt her feet hit the ground. Hearing cursing Sora took off, but didn't get to far. Tumbling down and hill Sora felt the air get knocked from her when he landed on top of her. " I'd say I'm sorry, but you brought it upon yourself" he said picking her up and slinging him over his should like a shake of potatoes.
Sora stayed still till she caught her breath and imeditaly started to kick and scream. " Put me down!" Sora yelled connecting with her foot. " I will once we're inside" he growled and contined toward the house. Sora eventually gave out when she wore herself out.
Trevor sighed as he entered the house. Of course he had to find the one human who would try and escape and stand up to him. " I'm putting you down now" Trevor said putting her down in a chair and she glared at him. " This better be a really bad joke or I'm going to make your life a living hell till you let me go" she growled and Trevor wanted to kick himself. " Eat first and I will explain once your done. One of the servants will escort you to the library once your done" Trevor said leaving her alone.
Trevor paced the libaray how the hell was he suppose to explain the complexity of Keepers to a human who probably didn't believe in vampires and would freak out the moment he told her. "She can't leave tell her what we are and explain to the best of your ability" his father said looking up from a book. " Aren't you suppose to be leaving so I can talk to her alone?" Trevor snapped and his father grinned. " I thought I might stay close just encase she tries to stake you or something" his father said going back to his book. " Master Trevor she is here" Kia said leaving as she walked in.
Sora looked around in awe she'd always dreamed of owning her own personal library. " If you'll take a seat I'll start explaining" a familiar voice said and Sora walked to the chair and say down. " First off who the hell are you I don't even know what to call you" Sora said and he nodded. " My names Trevor" he said sitting down himself. " My names Sora, now get to explaining" she said crossing her arms over her chest. Stand he started to pace. " Your familiar with the term vampire right?" he asked and Sora nodded. " Yeah the living undead drink blood blah blah. I personally don't like that theroy but that is the main one" Sora said and he nodded. " Well what if they were real and say a certain girl was the key to a certain blood lines servival and she was also a vampire "soul mate" and if she was to die the whole blood line would die out" Trevor said continuing to pace.
Sora sat there and thought about what he'd just said and shrugged. " I guess if that was true then the vampire and his/her blood line would be force to go to extremes to protect the girl, but the whole "soul mate" I don't get vampires don't have souls" Sora said and he sighed. " Okay say vampires aren't "dead" they're just enhanced with certain genetic perks that were passed down from one of the four blood lines and are just like normal people but have to feed on blood and won't die unless beheaded or a stake through the heart that isn't removed" Trevor said and she nodded. "Okay get to the point so far all I'm getting is something about vampires" Sora said and Trevor sighed.
" I'm a vampire and your the girl I was talking about, well it more complex then that but I'll explain that later" Trevor said and Sora crossed her arms over her chest. " Prove it" Sora said and Trevor was shocked she wasn't screaming and trying to get away. Opening his mouth he shift his teeth forward and gasped when she grabbed up and yanked. " They're real" she gasped backing up. Closing his mother Trevor watch her reaction. "I've been kidnapped by a vampire" Sora said. What the hell had she gotten herself into.
*Authors Note*- Got bored and since I don't have school this week and I don't have any ideas for my main I wrote on this again. I know it's jumbled all my chapters will probably be like that. I like this chapter better then my last still haven't told you exactly why Sora is so important and what her role as a Keeper is but you'll found out soon enough ;) If I gave it away to soon it would be as fun. Feedback is appreciated I like see the reads but could you at least leave a comment like good or bad or something like that. (Edited my typo)
Midnight Kidnapping21:59 Nov 22 2010
Times Read: 474
Thanks for the feedback I know I don't separate into paragraphs but this is just a quick story that I write in when I have time so it's gonna be a bit jumbled since I'm not gonna put a lot of time into it when I have my main that I'm not posting to edit. The length of Chapters will vary just depends on how much time I have and where I feel like dropping it off .
Chapter 3
Sora sighed as looked at the ceiling she was suppose to getting away from this stupid town but her she was staying with Remy and his mom who was watching her like a hawk making she that she didn't try to leave without a plan. As if she was gonna go anywhere when the woman had taken her shoes away and her extra clothes.
If she wasn't allowed to go out on her own soon she was gonna crawl out the window and see if she could climb down the tree and not break anything. "Sora mommy said it's time for dinner" Remy called and Sora sighed and climb down the ladder. " I'm gonna end up breaking my neck going down the thing" Sora said shoving the ladder back into place and shuting the door. " Nu huh it's safe" Remy said matter factly as he ran into the kitchen. " Sora you really should come down from that room more often it's not good for you to stay cooped up all the time you could have gone shoppingwith me this morning" Remy's mom said setting a plate of food in front of both of us. " I don't have any money" Sora said looking at the plate of chicken and carrots. " I really shouldn't be eatting you guys food" Sora said and Remy's mother glared at her as she tried to get up. " You sit down and eat your dinner don't think your to old for me to take a switch after you" Remy's mother ordered hands on her hips. " Yes Mrs. Ray" Sora said sitting down and picking at her food.
Going back up to her "room" Sora laid down on the bed and pulled out the book she'd been reading about werewolves. Yawning Sora laid on her back holding the book above her face reading till the words began to blur. Marking the page Sora rolled over and went to sleep. Maybe she'd go out tomorrow with Remy's mom.
Trevor sighed as he walked to the house and climb up the tree byt the window and sighed with relief that she was still there. Now he just had to think of a way to get her out of the house without waking anyone or hurting the girl.
Fading into the room Trevor paced around and froze when the girl mumbled in her sleep and pulled the covers over her head. " Now how am I suppose to not wake up you" Trevor said and her eyes instantly shot open and a bright light momentarily blinded him. " Who the hell are you and how the hell did you get in" she yelled and Trevor sighed so much for doing this the easy way.
Trevor quickly darted out of her sighted and could hear her heat beat accelerate he didn't want her to have a panic attack. The girl back away from the bed and managed to find him in the room. " I'm not gonna hurt you" Trevor said taking a step closer and she back up another step. Taking a few steps closer Trevor cursed when he realized that she hadn't shut the attic door and she'd backed up and lost her balace and was about to fall down the attic door.
Sora slipped and fell through the door and landed on her back. Air rushing out her lungs Sora gasped as her head hit the ground and her vision when black. She really needed to remember to shut that door.
Trevor cursed and slid down the ladder and listened for anyone getting up. Sighing he glanced at the girl she was gonna have one hell of a head ache when she woke up, but she'd made his job a bit easy.
Trevor sighed and he carried the girl to his house and laid her down in one of the guest bedroom and told one of his parents servants to keep an eye on her till he had time to check on her himself. Looking at the clock Trevor sighed. Midnight the witching hour and the time when all his kind started to hunt. Glancing back the room he sighed he'd have to leave to hunt and hopefully the girl wouldn't cause any trouble while he was gone.
*Authors Note*- Been gone awhile and haven't really had time for this I know it's a bit scrambled or at least I think so but I just realized I hadn't typed on this thing for awhile and decided to go ahead and type up something. It isn't my best work but it'll get better.... hopefully.
Midnight Kidnapping 04:09 Nov 15 2010
Times Read: 491
No feedback from this so far so I'll probably take it off later when i get bored with it.
Chapter 2
Sora felt a annoying tug on her jeans and glanced down to see Remy at the end. "Hi Sora" he said grinning showing that his two front teeth were missing. " Good morning Remy" Sora said smiling and inching out and wrapping her blanket up and stuffing it in her bag. Stretching Sora walked with Remy to school to make sure the boys that had been bullying him left him alone. " Mommy said you can stay with us" Remy said grabbing her hand. " I'll stay tonight if that will make you happy" Sora said and Remy smiled and nodded vigorously.
Dropping Remy off Sora walked to his house and made herself as home in the attic. This is where she usually stayed. Rose would go pick up Remy and then come home and it would be just like any other time she stayed here.
Trevor walked to the park he had seen the girl and frowned when he say that she wasn't anywhere to be found. Had he imagined her? Using his nose he followed the trail to a little house on the outskirts of town. Climbing up the side of the house and stopped when he spotted her sleeping in the attic. Melding into the air and slipping through the cracks along the window he materialized into the room and sighed. This fascination with this human needed to end. Trying to slip to her mind to wake her up without panicking her. He frowned when he ran into a block . Trying again and again he ran into the same problem deciding he'd question his dad about this problem he left the same way he came in.
" Dad?" Trevor asked walking into the library. " Yes son?" his father said in a questioning tone. " I ran into a human that I couldn't wrap my mind around no matter how hard I tried. Have you ever ran into something like that?" Trevor asked and his father seemed to go still. " Your certain?" his father asked buzzing the room his mother would be in. " What is it honey?" his mothers voice came from the intercom. " Trevor has found his Keeper" his father said and Trevor heard his mother scrambling to get up to the library. " What's a Keeper?" Trevor ask and his father smiled. "A Keeper is a human that can't be control by the vampire they encounter they are rare and only special vampires are gifted one. It's seen as a sign of change in the blood lines. This human is essential to our blood lines survival you have to get her here as soon as possible where did you find her?"his father asked and Trevor sighed. " She was living in the park in that little town when I went to see if I could catch her she was gone and was in a house in the attic sleeping" Trevor said and his father nodded. " Were there others in the house that know she's there?" his father asked and Trevor nodded. " Then it's settled you'll kidnap her tomorrow. Good luck son" his father said smiling.
*Authors Note*- Not sure how well put together this is I haven't really reread it to check since this is my fun story that I don't have to focus on. Ummm feedback would be GREAT considering I haven't gotten any yet.
Midnight Kidnapping 03:14 Nov 08 2010
Times Read: 505
Story off the top of my head and I've had to type this twice so hopefully this one turns out okay. Feed back would be appreciated.
Chapter 1
Trevor sighed as he laid in his bed listening to his parents argue over his 100th birthday. Being born of the Lunar clan meant he had to take a human "slave" on his 100th birthday and continue to add to it as he got older, but personally he thought being in his blood line sucked. Trevor rolled over on his bed and looked out the window into the forest. Somewhere out there was an unlucky human that was gonna end up being used for nothing but a food source for him.
Trevor walked the streets of the near by town and sighed it was the same as any other time. The people here were dole and nearly lifeless it was like watching black and white tv. Nothing interesting ever happened and he was certain that he was going to have to go to the city to find a suitable human, but he didn't have time for that tonight. Walking into the bar Trevor singled out a girl and took her to the ally and easily slipped into her mind and took what he needed from her and continued his walk around the town thinking he wouldn't find anything of interest. Boy was he wrong.
Sora sighed as she sat in the swing at the park and felt like crying, so much for an awesome 18th birthday instead she's been thrown out and told that her stuff was in storage and that she had 30 days to get it out or they would sell her stuff. She'd walked three miles into the town she grew up in. " Isn't it a bit late for someone like you to be here" Sora heard a male voice say but she couldn't see anyone. Sora chuckled " Who's gonna get me the boogie man? Please I outgrew that by the time I was 7" Sora said and heard a chuckle and could almost picture his smile. " No I suppose not, but there are much more dangerous things then the boogie man" he said and Sora felt the hair on the back of her neck stand up and her heart rate quicken. Another chuckle and the sounds off foot steps leaving made her relax. " Go home girl the night is no place for you" he said and Sora sighed in relief.
Sora got up and went to the play tube that she'd played in as a kid and found her blanket and bag waiting for her. Climbing in she covered up and shook as she felt the adrenaline leave her system. She didn't know who the guy had been, but she wasn't about to find out tomorrow she was going to yet again try and find a place to stay. Closing her eyes she drifted to sleep.
Trevor walked around the block and climb up the house to watch the girl that seem to fascinate him for some reason. He watched as she climbed into the play tube he'd seen kids after kids play in and go to sleep. If the girl was still there she may be the unfortunate one to be the one he snatched to be his own.
Authors Note: This is the second time I did this and no there was no planning to this so tell me what you think about and and understand that I'm sometimes busy with school and won't always update all the time. The more feed back I get the more likely I'll try and put time aside to update, but don't harass me when I don't do it quick enough.
Thank you,
CrimsonMoon2011
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COMMENTS
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AnaliethiaThionoeSangita
22:57 Dec 07 2010
After that chapter I must confess though it was head and shoulders above the last two chapters it also confused me. your charactor trevor's developement is a bit bi-polar. with no middle ground. try putting a transition stage between his dislike for the human and his love her needs to battle it out slowly not just go "She wasn't that bad of a human a bit strange but she was okay." this would be a good time to discribe your charactor like she was siting in the chair her head resting on her shoulder as she breathed softly he watched as her chest rose and fell in a slow careful rythym. Her eyes closed he niticed how long her lashes were they brushed he flushed cheek softly. Her mouth slightly open with her bottom lip sticking out in a slight plout made her look so sweet so inocent he decided "she wasn't that bad for a human, a bit strange, but she was okay." if they are soul mates or even if they are not there needs to be a bit of curiousity between the two main charactors. He needs to be sublimanally attracted to her. this show the soft side of him but gives him that transition he needs.
Ana
AnaliethiaThionoeSangita
20:45 Dec 18 2010
I was hoping for a new entry... oh well I'll check back later....
=)