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Simply Wrong

16:32 Jul 28 2008
Times Read: 563




Things have a way of going wrong

but how can you set them strait

A little piece of heart has shattered away

and how do you mend it's pieces to stay



take a little piece of you and me

look at the world through fantasy

take yourself away from the pain

and look at beauty all around again



you take those pieces thrown away

that open space, we'll heal today

you and I will love again

to wander in each other, where none has dared to tread



It's Simply Wrong,

when the beauty is gone

It's Simply Wrong

to end greatness just for fun



It's easy to cast aside love,

what we've always wanted

Just because you cannot look in their eye

and know their heart does not lie



Often tender souls

are thrown about,

A kindler, gentler manner..

you and I, there will be no doubt



It's Simply Wrong...

that someone desires you

they know you're the one,

and you can't sense their love, it's just wrong











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DevilsGirl
DevilsGirl
03:52 Dec 29 2008

Beautiful, you make a better version of my poem.

~Kudos~





 

Tears or Rain

16:29 Jul 28 2008
Times Read: 564








Run through the rain...

Feel the caress of my pain..

It's running down my face,

As the rain washes it away...



Look into sand...

Hold it in your hand...

Let a form take shape,

What will be the shape you make?



If it was my heart,

How would you hold it...

A gentle grip, or a destructive hand,

or would you let it crumble it's self away?



Have you ever ran in wind...

Closing your eyes as your arms turn to wings...

Soaring through your minds clouds

With no more sorrows or worry of things



Ever look at something, beautiful

and not know why you were drawn to it

is it fate or some odd design

like a magnetism, you're meant to be mine



So will you kiss me,

Will you hold me right...

We can still run through the rain...

for it'll wash away our stains



Do you wonder beyond the clouds?

Is it empty and with no sound

or full of life and more wonders

Am I part of your hearts ponders?



Like a key made for one lock

as your fingers will interlace mine

An Illuminated path as bright as our sun

Lit the way to our heart full land



But we can not see with the tears in our eyes

The mist of forgotten rains will soon depart

All that is needed is to fill this empty well

With your tenderness, your love, your eternal spell








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xMitsix
xMitsix
10:13 Sep 25 2008

Gobby that is BEAUTIFUL!!!



I Loves it








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