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Story I wrote

21:44 Mar 23 2006
Times Read: 550


Greeting everyone...



I have a story i just put up in my Comm..



Please let me know what you think.. One of my friends is helping me write it..



Right now I am having a huge writers block about a part im working on now..



I will put the rest of the story up...



http://groups.msn.com/64aus3vjg1fb4grkcngvb8qmo3/trs.msnw?action=get_message&mview=0&ID_Message=9



Thats the link to the story... I do like feed back about it..


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History(Part 2)

19:47 Mar 22 2006
Times Read: 561




Tibris began to to understand why her father was like that twords her and her mother Panthera. Secretly Tibris made a plan to get her vengence on her family.

Every evening after dinner Tibris would steal away to meet with her grandfather Michael. They would discuss her plans and iron out the flaws and make sure that they had a back up plan if the first part of it failed. Her grandfather also would teach her skills that only archangels would know, such as the infamous sword slash that had killed so many of her kind before her birth. "Grandfather why are you teaching me the cross cut? " She asked him one day as he stayed in the temple. Tibris's grew uneasy as she waited for her grandfather to speak." I am teaching you because I wanted to teach your mother but I never got the chance. She was supposed to be apart of the army of heaven but your grandmother being envious of her sent her to hell to be married to your father Dark Lord." Michael said as he watched her movements. As he began to tell the story of her mother Tibris began to feel a darker ability start to emerge from her already unholy soul. "Stop!!! Make it Stop!!!!" She screamed as the energy surge was too strong for her. As she screamed several of demonic beings formed from the ground wearing armor with her symbol on the shields. To her grandfather, this was Tibris's special ability. " It is time for you to attack granddaughter. Your father will not be able to hold out against you not with legions of demons fighting beside you. " he said as he walked over towards her.

"I will do what I have to to make him feel my fury." she said her eyes flashing red and then settling on black rimmed red. Her grandfather embraced her and said

"Keep your mother safe at all costs. I wish to bring her back to heaven with me." " I will try.." was the only thing she could say as he disappeared in a blinding white light.



Panthera paced back and forth in her room. Tibris had not come home from her secret meeting and that worried her. Looking out the window, her eyes widened. As she watched she saw row after row of warriors making their way twords the palace. She began to panic when she could not see her daughter with them. Unfortunately, Tibris was in the very front, marching along side of them armed with her grandfathers sword and armor. She hissed softly as the armor burned her unholy skin. She did not care about anything except making her father suffer at the end of the very sword that had killed many of her kind. Surprisingly marching to the palace she was met with no resistance until she felt her brothers and sisters begin to make their way twords her ready to protect their father. Only 5 brothers landed softly in front of Tibris and bowed to her. They assured her that they would help her fight. Unmoved by fury all Tibris could do was allow them to fight with her. She also hoped that the war would go topside just incase she needed her grandfathers help. But if did not happen she was going to make the very foundation of hell shake to where heaven itself would feel it. There was no remorse in her eyes as she glared twords the castle. She knew her mother was inside and she had promised her grandfathe that she would try to make sure she was safe. Holding up her hand the army stopped about 70 yards away from the castle. Now she was ready.



Inside the castle walls

Dark Lord was sitting on his throne when one of his many children came and told him about the army outside the walls. Laughing he donned his armor and quickly made his way to the battlements. "What is she thinking trying to go up against me."he growled out cause the other 10 apocolyptic angels to shake in fear. "She is going against you to bring you down.."Panthera said as she climbed the steps to the battlments. Dark Lord in fury struck her hard in the face causing her to plummit down the steps again. Panthera struggled to stand up as she made her way twords the gates of the castle to get out to be with her daughter.



Tibris saw the gates open and her mother comming twords her running but something was wrong. She sensed it in her mothers pace. Rushing foward Tibris met her mother halfway. Tibris caught her mother before she fell onto the ground. " Tibris...? Im... Im.. glad I got to see you one last time." Panthera said as she reached shaky hand to her daughter face. "Mother dont die on me... Grandfather wants you beside him where you belong." Tibris said as the tears started to pour down her face. Suddenly a white light engulfed the entire army as Michael, God's Chosen defender appeared next to Tibris. " Give her to me. I will take her home." he said as he took Panthera into his arms. With that they disappeared as suddenly as he had come. By now Tibris's fury was in overdrive. Without further hesitation she raised her hand and motioned for them to charge the castle. The battle had begun.



Dark Lord was stunned that his best fighter would go against him. He sent his remaining followers into battle against them. All efforts failed. Dark Lord was alone against his prized fighter: Tibris. He laughed " Well let me see I should call you a fool for thinking that you could go up against me and win. But I give you an applause for effort." Tibris just merely smirked" You know what father... I was a fool to trust you... and to even think that I actually respected you as a father. I am going to make sure your death is a slow and painful one." shesaid her voice full of malice. Dark Lord glared. " How dare you speak to your father in such a way. You will pay for your stupidity." he growled out as he rushed twords her sword drawn. Tibris wasnt amuzed. Easily she dodged his sword as he ran past her, connecting her sword with his back. Dark Lord let out an inhuman scream as the holy blade sliced into his skin. Hissing he turned around and came at her swinging his sword in a downward arch. Tibris blocked but was knocked to a knee. She struggled to get her balance as he tried to put pressure on his sword almost crushing her to the ground. Tibris had to think fast. Reaching behind her she drew a dagger and quick jabbed out slashing him deep in the knee. As he howled in pain Tibris did the one thing she was taught. Flipping over her father and landing behind him she quickly did two slashes into his body.She had done the cross cut on her father. He made one last attempt before she drove the sword deep until the hilt was all that was left as the blade exited his body through the chest. But she did not stop there. Tibris withdrew the blade and cut off Dark Lords head. But after she stood there over her fathers corpse she wasnt sure if he was truely dead. So she rammed her fist into the chest cavity and pulled out his heart. She had done it. Her vengence was complete. She held the heart above her head as the blood trickled down he arm. She didnt care that her clothes were dripping in blood nor the burning armor. All she cared about was that it was over. Just one thing puzzled her. Who was going to reign in hell. Suddenly a laugh echos in the wind."Whoever sits on this throne their reign will begin in blood and henceforth it shall end that way for all eternity." the voice said. Tibris let out a cry of pain as she felt a much more hellish force form inside of her. Her wings that were black were now red and her skin burned as it turned red. Holding her head she felt tiny horns form. "What.. is going on?!" she cried as a fire consumed her body.



Tibris was scared. Her grandfather had not told her of this before. A white pure light appeared behind her as her mother stepped through it. Her wings were pure white and she stood in her beauty. "Mother tell me whats happening?" shesaid her voice frightened. Panthera looked upon her daughter with a sad face. "You are ruler of hell now. I tried to warn you but you would not listen. For that you are to rule hell for eterni ty." she said her voice drawn. "Then I shall rule where everyone fears me." Tibris said her voice low but words full of anger. " I love you Tibris. You will always be my daughter no matter what." Panthera said as she disappeared. Tibris laughed "Everyone will feel my fury.. and yes mother not even you are safe." That laugh echoed through the halls as hell welcomed its new ruthless queen whose fury had no end.

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History of Tibris( one of my character)

19:45 Mar 22 2006
Times Read: 562




The history of the 17th angel of the Apocolypse

Since the dawn of time there has always been a delicate balance between the forces of good and the forces of evil. In the wake of the pending war between Heaven and Hell, the Lord of Hell created 17 demonic angels. Each of the Angels had special abilities, but the 17th one the Dark Lord paid special attention. He tought her the ablities to call forth the demons of hell as well as the fallen souls. Unfortunately at the time of her creation the 17th angel did not have a name. The Dark Lord gave her the name Tibris. Whenever Tibris was unleashed mortals would tremble at her feet and beg for mercy. She is much stronger than her other siblings. The Dark Lord saw her potential as becoming the next in line for the crown of hell. He began to train her in the use of the dark arts. She became so involved in her training that she did not forsee the war between heaven and hell.

A Few Days Later

The war in the Heavens was a bloody one. Both sides lost many angels. The angels would fight until there was no blood in them left. Tibris fought along side of her siblings. One by one she watched them fall. She was the only one against the final 3 angels of heaven. Remembering her training she summoned the fallen spirits of her siblings. Enfused with their powers Tibris's aura changed from red to black. Her sword became a blood thirsty weapon as she thrusted it into the first angel of light. He emitted a cry that would have made a humans ears erupt. She tore the sword upward bringing the blade through the angels head.The blood gushed forth all over Tibris. She had never felt all this dark energy flowing through her. Finally Tibris was facing the final angel of Light. As they struggled Tibris was wounded several times. After annialiating the final angel of light Tibris collapsed into hell, weak and on the verge of dying. Her father fearing that he was about to lose his best fighter as well as his daughter, sent Tibris to earth to inhabit a human child that was to be born the same night. Thus Kegaro was born with a demonic entity inside her. She was concidered the prodigy of her father Dark Tiger Ninja. One night she was with her mother Ayanosuke when her clan was viciously attacked. In the heat of battle Kegaro saw her mother stabbed in order to save her own life. The clan was destroyed. Kegaro fled into the woods where she spent a total of 10 days. She didnt want to remember anything so she supressed the memory.

17 years later

Kegaro grew into a beautiful warrior. She was an extrodinary in her skills with the sword. But men were afraid of her. She never understood why until she was reunited with her father. He then explained everything. He told her that ever since she was born when she became angry she would turn into a demon and the boys would run away. But that was not all, he told her of a time when she was in demon form and she threw a boy off a cliff out of pure anger. It was hard for Kegaro to understand that she had a demonic being inside of her. It scared her. He began to teach her about the skills that her demon possessed. She also learned that it was a demon the finished off the destruction of her clan. Kegaro felt that it was her own demon that had killed them off. Every night since she found out about her demonic being, Kegaro had brutal nightmares. They would cause her to wake up screaming and she refused to go back to sleep. Her father would try everything but nothing seemed to work. The nightmares would play in her head even when she was awake during the day. She tried to meditate to block the memories and it worked but only for a while.

She began to seek information about these apocolyptic angels. What she found about her preticular demon was very sad.

The information was:

Tibris was the pride and joy of Panthera, the queen of Hell. Unfortunately it was not the same feeling she got from her brothers and sisters. Her father had tried to destroy her before she was even born. After her birth her father saw her potential as a fighter and decided that he would train her himself. Even though she was his perfect fighter, Tibris knew what he had done to her and her mother. Vengence would be hers. So she stayed silent about it. Panthera and Tibris would meet in secret to arrange the whole ordeal.



One hellish evening after her training, Tibris happened to stumble onto her father viciously raping her mother. Tibris ran to save her mother only to get knocked away by her fathers powerful tail. Afterwards, in front of Panthera, Tibris was beaten by her 16 siblings and then left for dead. Panthera stayed beside Tibris weeping. Tibris had but cut and pieces of her flesh had been torn away from her body. Panthera knew what had to be done. Gently lifting her daughter's half dead body off the ground Panthera walked into a secret temple, that had been hidden from the other demons for centuries. Upon the alter Panthera layed Tibris's body. Panthera tended to her daughter's wounds as she prayed to her father for guidence. A blinding white Light appeared before Tibris's body and an angel stepped out. Panthera could hardly believe her eyes. Her father, Michael, had heard her pleas. She was so happy that she cried wanting to run to him and have him hold her just like he did when she was a child of light.

Michael looked at Panthera and then at the body laying on the alter. He reached out and touched Tibris's hand and his body emmited a soft white glow. As Panthera watched Tibris's body lifted off the alter and rested in Michaels arms. Tibris opened up her eyes, smiled and fell asleep in her grandfathers arms. "Do not worry daughter, I will never harm my granddaughter. I have seen what the others have done to her and I have bestowed on her a gift. She will have the ability to gain strength from defeats. She will also have my white energy power. I do miss you my darling daughter. If I had known that your mother would have sent you to hell I would have stopped it." Michael said as he held Tibris in his arms. He then put her back on the alter as she continued to emmit the white glow. Michael reached out for Panthera. Panthera still crying, ran to her father. Her tears had turned from blood to pure tears. Michael realizing that soon his whereabouts would be known he kissed Panthera on the forhead. " I have to return home now or else your mother will grow impatient about my location. Take this sword and keep it near always" He said as the Light engulfed his figure. After the light died down Panthera was alone once again. There was a sword laying where her father had disappeared. Tibris finally awoke. She sat up and looked around. There was a dagger in the hand her grandfather had touched before.

Panthera and Tibris left the temple and returned to their father. Tibris was forever changed as well as her mother. Together they would bring hell to the very gates of hell itself. With the fighting knowledge that her father infused into her mind and the loving heart that her mother placed in her body since birth Tibris was ready to Unleash her own Hell..

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