Watch and wait with eyes that gleam
in the shadows for nowhere one can look
until the moment has arisen from within a mere
mortal woman innocent and sweet out walking
the night without a care or worry on her mind
and then the vampyre strikes has target with easy and not have any trouble and looks into her eyes and in a tranze she goes and grabs her tightly and brushes her hair back from her face and bares her naked neck and he leans in toward closer to her neck and he opens his mouth and reveals his fangs and like in slow motion pushes into her neck and breaking the skin and blood pours out and deeper he goes in and places his mouth around the bite marks and draining of her energy her lifeforce that is within her spirit and soul. This is how a vampyre kisses
COMMENTS
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Passionforblood
08:29 Sep 07 2008
This one makes me melt in side how I would love you to taste me like that , How I feel so hot when I read it . I really love it !!!
TheVampyreNico
19:46 Sep 07 2008
Why thank you I am glad that you enjoyed it.
LittleFox
07:35 Dec 15 2008
i love this poem nico
StormVampressa
08:46 Jan 09 2009
i love it its brilliant like you
not ignoring you and I wont forget you im just out of messages for the day lol
will message you when the sun sinks in oz again blessed vampire of mine....
Storm
FallnAngel
02:42 Aug 21 2009
wonderful!
GeniveneWard
03:04 Nov 08 2009
My dear friend I would greatly enjoy such a kiss.
EternallyYours
06:45 Dec 30 2009
Nice..*smiles*
NightRaven
07:29 Feb 19 2010
wow im speachless is good very good
MasterSanguinis
06:08 Apr 05 2010
Heart felt, passion rising another well done poem....my dear Fanged brother Niko.
Musette
11:31 Apr 09 2010
to me i think there are many way to be kissed but this does indeed cover the taking of the life force in a kiss
again well done
Lilithxx
06:41 Sep 13 2011
Very nice {:
JazmynKnight
01:35 Sep 17 2011
Romantic,sexy and true.
Desire1
06:55 Jun 25 2013
This one made me smile. Very poetic and picturesque
SexyGothAngel
05:48 Aug 20 2014
great