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Her mind only wonders more and more at the though of him. His voice is like the soft classic music every one loves to hear in the dead of night. She sits by the window waiting on his return. How she misses the feeling of his skin against hers. She fixes her glasses and lays her head against the window and closes her eyes. She's only been waiting 5 years on his return she knows they announce his death but he would never leave with out saying good bye.....

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DarkestTemptation
04:43 May 28 2018

Sounds like a tease to a really nice story!

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sippa
04:46 May 28 2018

Tto be continued????

a very nice start

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immorteb
04:49 May 28 2018

I like this a lot, there is no conclusion, she is just left waiting, its quite sad because she never got the goodbye. Love it 10/10

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XxRavesCryxX
04:52 May 28 2018

Thank you for your comments. This is the entry to the story I'm writing.

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immorteb
04:55 May 28 2018

Ah i see, nice keep up ttue good work

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TheHaunted
01:59 May 29 2018

very nice.

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