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Circling vultures

a metallic taste

an intense chill

Rapid recollections

As you fade away

to oblivion

all that remains

are the memories

you impressed upon others

fringe cacophony

fiendishly abuzz

a distant dirge

mingles into

merciless wind

dusted with

skin felt audio

tainted with grit

when amplified silence

becomes shelter

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VAMPIREBONNIE
21:45 Apr 22 2010

I like this poem..it is layered in emotion

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cadrewolf
16:39 Apr 24 2010

Dabbler you have a way with words and feelings that draw you internally into the message.

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dabbler
16:59 Apr 24 2010

Thank you

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WaitsForTheMoon
01:37 Jun 18 2010

i really like it, its is so perfectly distilled.

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not I,

the message

presented

disregard my person

ragged burlap cloak

once white

now gray with ash

fall-out

from humanities combine pyre



note not my actions

indiscretions

insignificant am I

agent of limbo

indifferent

mistake not

as merriment

this resonating laughter

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VAMPIREBLONDEE
03:27 Apr 14 2010

intense

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WaitsForTheMoon
01:39 Jun 18 2010

this is good too, I like the meter.

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Angst Whelp

Weep in your corner

sneer at members

as they pass

in greetings

avow your whoa

three lines or less

in capital cliches

And blurted txt spk

telling nothing relavent

to anyone remotly intersted

in anything but your

Whoa be Angst!

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VAMPIREBLONDEE
19:37 Apr 07 2010

LMAO...you peg them quickly and accurately.

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atyourwindow
21:18 Apr 07 2010

well said dabbler lol

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WaitsForTheMoon
01:40 Jun 18 2010

Well aimed shot sir.

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