…out the window…down the fire
escape…SHITTHEBOX!!!…i scrambled,
reaching out over the edge…and the
world went ass-end over teakettle,
i held onto the rail with my left hand
and the box with the right…i hung somewhere
between…i looked down—Toby!
rat-stinking bastard!
in the alley below…i could see his
lips mouth prayers to some god,
some monster likely,
willing me to fuck up…my left fingers
struggling…my right fighting me to let
go and grab the rail…all of me screaming
inside for my traitorous right hand to not
let go…
it was one or the other…
i knew this is what my everything
had been moving towards…
i let go…
the room was dirty…big surprise…
dirty vinnie was still dead in the north
corner of the room…the damn, dirty room…
dirty vinnie…and suddenly i was kneeling
before the porcelain god worshiping
the only way i know how…
with everything inside of me…
i got my shit together, washed my face,
the back of my neck…this was bad…
worse than bad…this sucked balls…i
had to get out…before they got in…
…
silence…THERADIOSHIT!…
i grabbed the gun, the box and i did
the only sane thing i could think of…
i ran…
...i'd shred my eyes with
a cheese grater, if i thought it would save
me from the thoughts of what i saw...
the thoughts…
they’re just running rabid in
tiny concentric circles around
the empty space between my ears
...ricocheting against
the song lyrics…where was that
radio coming from?..down the hall…
must be…i thought the power was
out…i only had to open my eyes…
COMMENTS
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EmoDemon
01:02 Jul 12 2009
It's funny!
paxnor
01:14 Jul 12 2009
...thank you!
:)
ThothLestat
14:31 Jul 12 2009
awesome awesome awesome!
*applauds*
Angelus
01:05 Jul 18 2009
Gonzo goes Naked Lunch??
littleimp
06:05 Jul 21 2009
it very different and a little funny.
ladySnowStrixx
01:11 Jul 22 2009
VERY FUNNY HON,
paxnor
02:53 Jul 22 2009
...i think i really like being
funny...
:)
i could groove to it...
you guys are all great
for taking the time to
read it and comment!
:)
Lordpeace
08:47 Jul 24 2009
great this reminds me of somehting i read a while back or could it be somehting i saw hmmm nice work tho
Sinora
14:02 Jul 24 2009
Great stuff...well done.
paxnor
21:56 Aug 01 2009
...thank you guys!!
:)
for your time and your
comments...
i should have something
new in 2 maybe 3 weeks!
my muse is misbehaving...
:)
Bloodmother
23:46 Sep 11 2009
Are the pickles in the box? Is Toby supposed to be the internet, or is it the fire-escape?