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Hello. Hello?

23:42 Sep 11 2008
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This is a knew song that I just wrote. I know it's pretty bad but I'm just getting back to writing after a break of a couple of months. That's the equivalent of a 'normal' person not writing for over a decade.



Hello. Hello?

This is a letter

To the guy that I like

I know I'll never send it

But I had to try

Hello. Hello?



I wanted you to know

I like you, I love you, I care

But you're self-absorbed

I guess you don't notice me

I guess you never noticed

Hello. Hello?



I'll always be standing here

Waiting with bated breath

I just want one chance with you

One moment to tell the truth

Hello. Hello?



Who am I kidding?

You're out of my league

I can never be like them

The girls you love so much

Hello. Hello?



Have you seen me?

Do you even know I exist?

I'm forever waiting, alone

Hoping for the impossible

Hello. Hello?



This is a letter

To the guy that I like

You don't even know me

Won't be sorry when I die tonight

Hello. Hello?

Hello. Hello?

Hello.

Hello...


COMMENTS

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demonlovesyou
demonlovesyou
03:01 Oct 19 2008

Lovley poem a lovely song...



yes we do have letter in the heart it we do not convey and it become late and the time passes and we lost and its swet love remain in the heart... this happen in many person's life... even due to some barrier i too could not convey the letter in the teen age and i lost her...





Hathivis
Hathivis
01:10 Apr 13 2009

Good work. I feel like I can relate to this sometimes.





sculptarexdexfrumuse
sculptarexdexfrumuse
23:51 Jul 02 2009



This caught my eye. Perfect writing of a song and scene, and the words are really well made and authentic. You definitely have a way with words. Beautiful description on feelings. I really loved this...The way you wrote is beautiful, the words on how you spoke. I felt was rich and intreging.






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