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~ Flaw ~

18:28 Sep 02 2008
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~ Flaw ~



On any other night,

i may have let you pass by~

along the river, past the benches

beneath dimly lit gaslight that catches

the angle of your cheekbone

as you turn back and look

to a woman you may have imagined~



Your evening is mapped out in your brain

sending images that flicker and stutter,

halting in jerky gestures like the

nudie picture shows down by the Penny Arcade~

celluloid girlies with sepia toned smiles

on any other night...

they might have kissed you



but...



I am already in front of you,

i am already tasting you in my head~

imagining the smooth coppery planes

of your existence

the throb of your pulse against my tongue,

holding you fast between my thighs, beneath the secretive

folds of my gown.

i am already damp from your struggle....

i am already living your life~



The

Pulse

The

Beat

of you...



i shall not resist your earthiness,

your warm, gasping breath

catching the air in a crystallized vapor

of winter~

the warmth of your body beneath

wool,

how i will myself beneath each layer,

transcending the animated skin

to vein,

...the becoming one with you~



You will have convinced yourself

that you wanted this,

that in some distorted dream,

i have had you before~

the last halting smile of your recollection

as you wonder...



...have i seen her before?

...do i know the scent of her?

...was she one of those girls on the screen....?



Shhhhhhhh........



Little do you know as i slip toward shadow,

that your perfection was

your

only

...flaw.


COMMENTS

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Angelus
Angelus
17:56 Sep 20 2008

well... not being able to write isn't one of yours.

this is well excellent.





BlackTea
BlackTea
21:59 Sep 26 2008

Very enjoyable read. Thank you.





moonkissed
moonkissed
21:45 Oct 30 2008

wow very nice.





TrailorBoy
TrailorBoy
18:39 Apr 09 2009

OH MY!!



I like it!





Brooks91
Brooks91
02:38 Dec 09 2011

Again, the imagery is fabulous. I cant commend you enough on your ability to really bring the reader into your work. I felt like the flawed.





captainglobehead
captainglobehead
19:37 Apr 02 2013

You should be published.








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