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My love for you is forever

09:05 Feb 19 2009
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I look up into darkness,

the stars are shining bright.

My love for you is forever,

this just feels so damn right.



You fill that hole inside me,

the one inside my heart.

My love for you is forever,

it is going right off the chart.



You make my life complete,

the days no longer blend.

My love for you is forever,

my heart you have seemed to mend.



Your grumpiness is endearing,

your protectiveness is sweet.

My love for you is forever,

you have swept me off my feet.



Our lives are out before us,

together we will be.

My love for you is forever,

and im lucky you love me.



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ladySnowStrixx
ladySnowStrixx
17:27 Feb 19 2009

I liked this you must love someone very deeply.





NocturnalMistress
NocturnalMistress
00:34 Feb 20 2009

aww this almost maded me cry!! its so sweet!

and you claim you can't write poetry!

Pfft... you are a GREAT poet!!!



xD

It's so lovely!





beautifulmistake
beautifulmistake
13:23 Feb 20 2009

Erin that is fantastic............and you are so in love....**I want someone to love me!!** lol xx





WaitsForTheMoon
WaitsForTheMoon
18:31 May 18 2010

Like this very much.





GRTR1
GRTR1
00:27 Dec 25 2019

nice work





 

As you still stand at the door...

09:03 Feb 19 2009
Times Read: 812


You're standing at the door,

looking back at me.

I can not think, i can not feel,

what is it that you see.



The days are flying by,

as i sit upon the floor.

I look back up into your sad eyes,

as you still stand at the door.



The wind is calling out,

blowing forever more.

I cry into my bone-chilled hands,

as you still stand at the door



The weeks are creeping by,

staying sane is my chore.

Your bright eyes slowly ebb away,

as you still stand at the door.



My heart is no longer beating,

no more hurting to the core.

You step out into the cold world,

you no longer stand at the door.


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NocturnalMistress
NocturnalMistress
13:05 Feb 20 2009

awww *huggles*

I loves this too!!





DeadHeir
DeadHeir
08:43 Mar 23 2009

i like this one..





WaitsForTheMoon
WaitsForTheMoon
18:33 May 18 2010

This is very good





 

I am in NO way a poet... but here goes again :)

06:54 Feb 08 2009
Times Read: 834


Can you not hear me,

Calling out your name.

I am lost and can't be found,

Things will never be the same.



You are in my past,

My love for you no more.

I have found MUCH better,

Let me show you to the door.



At one point you were my light,

We had our lives out before us.

But now you don't mean a thing to me,

Leaving your memory behind is a must.


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NocturnalMistress
NocturnalMistress
09:36 Feb 08 2009

I like it ;)

"No Poet" my ass...

you're are good =]





LordOfNoctemAeternus
LordOfNoctemAeternus
02:48 Feb 12 2009

LOVED IT BABY





 

I am in NO way a poet... but here goes :)

06:47 Feb 08 2009
Times Read: 835


Can you truely show your face here,

After all the things transpired.

Ripped and torn and bleeding,

This is how you left me so devoid of fire.



Can you hear me calling your name,

Pleading you to stay.

I know you are no good for me,

But I can not stand the pain.



Ripped and torn and bleeding,

Is how you left my heart.

My soul is still intact,

This you can not have.



I want you to bleed,

I'd stand right there and laugh.

Love has turned to hatred,

You are now my past.


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NocturnalMistress
NocturnalMistress
09:40 Feb 08 2009

Mwuahahaha...

I love it.

You are most definitely a good Poet :P

Yesh, I am serious dear.. very very good :D



*hugshh*





WaitsForTheMoon
WaitsForTheMoon
18:34 May 18 2010

I disagree you are a very fine poet dear.








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