04:26 Dec 01 2010
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Chapter 1
It was 1952 when they said their 'I do's,' the rain beating against their backs as if being pelted by rocks, wind sweeping across their faces. Although, this was to be the happiest day on earth, it would not be so today for the newly wedded couple, Jillian, and Chase Lockhart.
The guests look from the pews, impatiently, at the now terrified couple. Even the reverend looked as if he'd jumped out of his skin. The reverend looked wide-eyed and shakily pointed at the ghastly figure that hid in the balcony of the church. Everyone turned to look. The cloaked figure unveiled itself, her alabaster skin shimmering under the moonlight, long silky ebony hair over flowing as if it were a willow tree blowing in the wind. It was Suki. Her gleaming green eyes shimmered in the dark as she whispered some faint, unknown language over and over again. "Ula bela lockta hach…ula bela lockta hach…"
She stared directly at Jillian as she chanted this verse, and without a second’s glance, sent Jillian flying across the room, thru the glass and landing on the stone statue that pose outside.
“JILLIAN” Chase cried out.
“There’s nothing you can do Chase. Why don’t you just give up? Give in to your temptation. Join me, become my Demon King,” Suki taunted, running her hands slowly up her leg revealing where her garter met her fishnet knee high.
“Never!” belted Chase as he shot Suki an evil look.
“Suit yourself, you never were one to have a lil’ fun.” Suki started to float down from the balcony towards Chase and took him captive. She blew what seemed to be a bluish, icy gas onto his face and he collapsed in her arms. She held on to him and with an evil chuckle, spread her great big bat wings and started to fly off.
As Jillian started to stand, she saw Chase being carried off into the dark sky. She yelled out, “You’ll never get away with this! Never!” and then fell back down on her hands and knees, crying, as the two figures disappeared.
....to be continued....
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