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Great! That is two profiles.
Remember if you are entering a poem/ story- post them here.
Let's rate and view these profiles, show support.
:D
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:D Great to see - now it is a contest.
Come on folks- join in.
Calling all writers: We need some spooky poems, stories to get us in the mood for this dark holiday.
You take one step, and it’s dark and sticky hot,
Quiet.... Yet maybe not
Your ears may hear mute, but the sound lies all around you
It whispers to your thoughts, till darkness surrounds you
Through the hotness comes a mist
To your soul, it’s bloodshot cold as it circles round your fist
It shoots up your arm as you cry a silent...
“Mercy!”
Your breathing becomes rapid but you don’t dare move
It rests on your shoulder no longer than a sec
You close your eyes in prayer,
Then it locks around your neck!
You gasp for air as it barricades your breath
You drop to close your eyes in sorrow till you’re sure the pain has left
With shaking body, soul to spirit, you sigh in relief
You take another step and the darkness
You scream to shake and pull at your roots
Please come to an end
And the silence whispers loud once again
Here’s the message that it sends:
“To make it stop you don’t need very much. All we ask is that you all start to listen. Listen to what you don’t see or believe but was always there. Listen to our calls of sorrow and mercy and with that we might both be set free.”
But with your selfish ways you black out these silent sounds...
And the scene replays and endless tune...
Until you hear the sounds surround you again...
Shhhhhh... Do you hear it??
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The Little Girl Who Wasn't, from LadySparrow
I lived in a house from hell for four years, from age eleven to almost sixteen. There was constantly something happening. Doors flying open and shut, voices, footsteps. Nothing ever stayed where you put it. I was alone there a lot because both my parents worked and I was constantly terrified.
One of the most gut-level disturbing things though was the little girl in my bathroom. Every time I walked past my bathroom door (which was constantly since it was right outside my bedroom) I saw a little girl with blond curled hair and a rose-colored dress. She just stood there, staring, looking like a photograph from 1905. I started keeping the door closed so I could walk by without seeing her, but she was always there when I opened it. Once I stepped in past her, I couldn't see her anymore but I could feel her there. She scared me, but I felt really sorry for her because she was trapped there, just like me, but probably forever.
As the years went by and things in the house continued to get worse, she started seeming... darker. I started feeling like she wasn't really a little girl. I knew there was something ugly in the house and I felt like it was presenting this sympathetic image to me. Then I started thinking I was completely losing my mind.
One day, when I was 14, I had a friend from out of town come stay with me for a week. I hadn't told her anything whatsoever about the house because I didn't think she would come if I did. Right after she got there we were sitting in my room and she left to go to the bathroom. About a minute later she walked back in with a puzzled look on her face and said "So, there's a little girl in your bathroom". "Um, I, yeah she hangs out in there. Blond hair?" "Curls? Pink dress? Yeah. You know that's not really a little girl, don't you?" I almost threw up. I was so relieved and terrified and excited and ready to run out of the house screaming. She wouldn't use my bathroom the rest of the week and I started using it as little as possible without pissing off my parents (who did not want to believe).
Eventually we moved out and I could not have been happier. I distanced myself from it mentally as much as I could. Then, when I was 18, I took another friend on a road trip to pack up a few things I'd left in the house (my parents hadn't managed to sell it, and wouldn't for 5 more years). The minute we got on the property, my friend seemed uncomfortable. When we came around the bend in the long, steep driveway, he went completely white. I could tell something was wrong, but he insisted he was OK, so we got to work. After a while he asked to use the bathroom and I directed him to mine. Not 20 seconds after he left, he came running back in, gasping for breath, andand slammed the bedroom door behind him. He started babbling about a little blond girl who isn't really a little girl. All of a sudden he went dead still, looked me in the eye, and very solemnly said "She's not happy. With you. You left, and you weren't supposed to". We threw whatever we could grab in two trips in my car (after I walked him to another bathroom and waited outside the door) and got the fuck out at top speed.
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Been asked- if you are a Lifetime Member you can 'gift' the prize to another.
Or add on to your yearly membership.
Or give it to another profile you own.
Hope to see more folks enter. :D
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Great! More Halloween fun to see.
:)
Remember you have to leave the profiles up till after the contest winner's are listed.
Plan to hit the judges up for votes on Tuesday, Nov 1st. Should have the winner's list that day or by the 2nd.
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Nashoba- copyright on the poem you enter.
Link-
http://www.huffingtonpost.com/dan-brown/a-spooky-halloween-poem-b_b_70616.html
by
Kristina Pineda, 8th grade student
Isaac Newton Middle School
East Harlem
New York City
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And the winners are....
Story-
1st place- Sachika for 1 year membership.
2nd place- Since no other story meet the requirements, the prize will be added to the profile section.
And since Sachika won in the story, she is removed from the profile part.
Profile-
1st place- Bitchcraft for a 1 year membership.
2nd place- AsylumFries for a 6 months membership.
3rd- Nashoba for a 6 months membership.
You can change your profiles back now since the judgement is done. Also please contact me so I can send the memberships to the correct person, profiles.
Thanks to all who enter. :) Hope it gave you some Halloween fun.
See everyone next year!
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Sachika, aka Soundwave, also used a story that did not belong to her. So her prize is void.