.
VR
VR Collab: Create A Story
The Sandbox
•  The Sandbox Home  •   Forums Home  •



Croatoan
Croatoan
Bestial Spirit (27)
Posts: 21
Honor: 0
[ Give / Take ]
Member of Legion (Coven)
Vampire Rave member for 9 years.
03:29:57 Apr 27 2017
Read 159 times

So I had this great idea to create a story for my journal presented in the form of a scenero game. Can we do this here?

Here is my idea:
I wanted to create a random story for the stories section of my Vampire Rave journal. But I thought it would be cool if I got other VR members in on it with their own creative input.
I also came up with a fun way to turn it into something of a scenero game where you can choose an option; an action to take listed from 3 different choices by each new posting member, who answered with their decision, for the character to perform.
Then they would continue the story with your own new sentence and 3 more courses of action for the next poster to choose from to further the story.

* The full story will be put together and updated into my VR journal's stories tab for anyone to come and read. Credit will be given to each participant as cowriters.


Rules:

- Please keep the story fairly decent. That means no racial, political, overly sexual, or involve any other controvertial issues. This doesn't mean it has to be child proof or family friendly, just that it could be more curtious toward more sensitive subjects.

- I strongly encourage creativity and imagination to be added to the story in whatever genre of literature you want, but I would also like the subject matters to be part of the natural progression of the storyline (a rodeo clown suddenly flying through space zapping mutant supervillians with a unicorn horn wand doesn't make much sence). XP


How to play:

#1 - Read the small paragraph, sentence, or phrase in the thread post that a fellow Vampire Rave member has written above you. Then read the 3 possible actions or developments to use listed below that labled as A, B, or C.

#2 - Comment with your choice of the a, b, or c options provided. This can be something that you would personally do in this particular scenero or the one you like best to spice up the situation. That choice then becomes the next part of the overall story that I will record in my journal.

#3 - Now write your own very next scene. Stop short of your description to add 3 completely different choices of your own that could be a possible result of your previous statement. The poster after you will then complete your scene by choosing an answer and continue from there by repeating this 1 2 3 process.


I will start us off with...


EXAMPLE:





In the back corner of the small dusty room, lay a lone black cat. It stared up at me and hissed a threat.


a) So I backed away in response, and turned to explore the other rooms as to not bother it further.

b) The poor thing must be alone and afraid, I thought. I dug into my pocket for a piece of left over jerky. I knelt down and proceeded to coax it closer.

c) It must have wondered in looking for mice in this old run-down place. Just another pest. I took a fragment of broken brick from the floor and threw it.

-----

Responce Post of the Next VR Member:


"b.

It's bright golden eyes beamed at me fiercely. I inched closer despite its low growls of warning. As I anchored myself above the cat, half eaten meat stick out stretched, its fur stood on end and its paws braced the scuffed wooden floor in preperation for a fight or flight reaction.

a) The cat sniffed me cautiously as it creeped toward the food. Admiring its beauty, I thought, if I could help this little guy, it would certainly make a great companion in this barron place.

b) Suddenly the cat lunged at me, delivering a stinging swipe at my left cheek, before scurrying passed me and out the loose hinged door of the room.

c) The poor thing, beyond frightened, dashed through my legs and out into the hall. I followed it out of the room, but stopped dead in my tracks when I realized it had disappeared into the darkness of the long cold corridor."

-----

[continue the story from here]



•  REPLY  •


Croatoan
Croatoan
Bestial Spirit (27)
Posts: 21
Honor: 0
[ Give / Take ]
Member of Legion (Coven)
Vampire Rave member for 9 years.
22:50:35 Apr 27 2017
Read 145 times

(answered in a journal comment. Thank you very much!)

"a"





I lay the piece of jerky at its feet. While it nibbles the meat timidly, I lightly stroke along its back. The cat flinches at my touch, but does not retreat. Just then, a wailing screech echoed through the halls. The cat bolts out of the little old room. I couldn't tell if the sound was a scream or just a strange noise.


a) I step out and peer into the twin dark corridors looking for either the frightened cat or source of the sound. I find neither.

b) I stand my ground in the little old room, deciding not to investigate for fear of what I may find. I miss the cat, but my dying flashlight concerns me more. I look around the room.

c) The cat quickly gobbles its meal and looks up at me, as if the disturbing sound never reached its ears. It meows as if in question. Excepting more food? I'm more worried about what I had heard.





•  REPLY  •


Croatoan
Croatoan
Bestial Spirit (27)
Posts: 21
Honor: 0
[ Give / Take ]
Member of Legion (Coven)
Vampire Rave member for 9 years.
22:32:13 Apr 30 2017
Read 134 times





A.



I aim my flashlight down each dark and gloomy direction. It flashes and fades as it begins to die. I'm going to need to leave soon if I plan on finding my way out.

a) So I head down the right corridor, where I think I came from. I've gotten so turned around in this winding place, I can't remember.

b) I begin to walk down the left corridor. It's creepy and the walls are falling apart, but I think I see a light coming from a far room.

c) Thinking that running around in the dark, alone with ghostly noises, is how stupid people in scary movies die, I decide to stay put and go back into the room to look for something I could use.


•  REPLY  •



• • • • THIS THREAD IS CLOSED • • • •
•  Closed by Vampirewitch39 on Jun 02 2017  •

•  The Sandbox Home  •   Forums Home  •

COMPANY
REQUEST HELP
CONTACT US
SITEMAP
REPORT A BUG
UPDATES
LEGAL
TERMS OF SERVICE
PRIVACY POLICY
DMCA POLICY
REAL VAMPIRES LOVE VAMPIRE RAVE
© 2004 - 2026 Vampire Rave
All Rights Reserved.
Vampire Rave is a member of 
Page generated in 0.0765 seconds.
X
Username:

Password:
I agree to Vampire Rave's Privacy Policy.
I agree to Vampire Rave's Terms of Service.
I agree to Vampire Rave's DMCA Policy.
I agree to Vampire Rave's use of Cookies.
•  SIGN UP •  GET PASSWORD •  GET USERNAME  •
X