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Serving Life (9/11/08)
01:39 Sep 12 2008
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There was two people

sitting across from on another

neither one looking at the

other

Both sentenced to serve for

life due to a knife

that caused pain and misery

for the whole world to see

It was televised on

national tv

the whole world sat back

and watched it for free

As two men was sentenced

for three seperate crimes

the jury reached their verdict

in three days time

The evidence stacked against them

through pictures and videos

some wondered if they were

set free, what would they do?

They already murdered

the people they once knew

violence is in their nature

that's nothing new

Some say they should of

already taken their last breath

for the crimes they comitted

they should of been sentenced

to death

But due to lack of supervision

they get a chance to live

even though they did something

that no one can forgive

They killed an entire family

watched them as they

suffered in pain

as they they took their lives

in vein

These two men now sit

across from one another,

each serving life

due to the use of a knife

COMMENTS

TaintedAngel14
01:43 Sep 12 2008

wow..thats..something, its really good, i enjoyed reading it...

TaintedPoison
04:51 Sep 12 2008

Isn't that the way prison is? You kill, rape, rob and get to sit in a well cooled climate with free food and water?

xcrimsonlustx
08:49 Sep 15 2008

Very well written!

AngelineDracul
00:26 Oct 10 2008

very well written and sooo very true i loved this writing:) its perfect

xoSareeox
19:51 Dec 02 2008

I really liked that one. you are very good at making up pomes. Maybe you could teach me some time.

bye

Ironknight
02:33 Feb 04 2009

oh shit thats all i got to say about that awesome man

xunaira
04:26 Feb 06 2010

i like this

Set Me Free (Why..?) (9/09/08)
01:17 Sep 10 2008
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Looking through a set

of prison bars

I wonder why my frredom

wouldn't stay

and why the world outside

me now fades away

I know I've done things

that I regret and can not

change

I'd give anything if

people would forget

so I could rearrange

My life and everything

in it to the way it use to be

before this inner misery

please somone help me

please set me free

From this world of

emotional pain and dispair

so I won't have to worry

who and who doesn't care

Everyone makes mistakes

that's what people use to say

with how life is now

children can't even go onto

a playground and play

I don't understand

it's not olike this was planned

the last time that I was free

it felt like a dream in which

I could barely see

There was three kids playing

outside and no one else inside

three shots rang out

it happened so fast that no one

could shout

Now I sit here at the end of my days

all I can do is sit and pray

that the crieme I didn't commit

will be something I'll to pay

and have to regret

all I have left now is the question

why..?

COMMENTS

xoSareeox
02:59 Sep 10 2008

That was great. I like it a lot. :)

good job

XxVampirePrincess101xX
07:39 Sep 10 2008

Wow...nice...your poetry is awesome...

TaintedPoison
04:52 Sep 12 2008

I found it sad

oxidisingangel
17:28 Dec 29 2008

WOW....this is good!!!

Here Lies (9/05/08)
01:40 Sep 07 2008
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Here lies a man of seven years

described his inner heaven

through tears of fear

as he waited in a cold in empty

cell, he contemplated would

could truly be his next scene in hell

He watched as the time went by

to scared to move or cry

what do you say to a man

at the end of the day who's fate's

already planned to the date

So at the end of the day he watches

out through the bars of his cell

picturing when or where his sanity

could of possibly fell

He then looks down at his pad and pin

trying to search for the right words to

write in the end that wouldn't offend

the only friend he had left

Now with only hours to go

where this life ends no one knows

cause for this man that once had

everything planned, down to the

tasks at hand

He now realizes that life is what

make of it, that's something

no one should forget or regret

So now when he looks outside

to try and figure out how he

feels on the inside

he looks back to keep on track

so that everything he now haves

or anything he could have

stays in sight and no longer just

be seen as a vision of fright

Here lies a man that had it all

and instead of taking a fall

and having his life slow to a crawl

he chose to live his life to the best

and left all the pain, hate and rage

laid to rest

COMMENTS

TaintedAngel14
20:32 Sep 07 2008

WOW....have you ever thought of being a poet...

demonlovesyou
11:26 Sep 08 2008

Lovely verse

lovely rhyme

lovely flow

XxVampirePrincess101xX
07:48 Sep 10 2008

Dude...you are a poet...

=]

Keep on writing...

TaintedPoison
04:53 Sep 12 2008

You have mad talent

A Blessing (9/06/08)
06:04 Sep 06 2008
Times Read: 1,031

About a year ago

I received what I know

now is the greatest

gift in my life

A child with the most

beautiful soul

a child full of life

and not strife

A child that lights

up a room when he smiles

all the while can sleep

so peacefully at night

I'm truly proud to say

that child's my son

he's truly the greatest

part of my day

He amazes me more

then any dream

he keeps my life from

falling apart at the

seams

I could be having the

worst day

and all he has to do is

laugh to brighten

my day in every way

He's the whole reason

that I'm still living

and the main reason

I haven't given up

Cause without him in my

life I wouldn't know

where I'd be

or what I'd want to see

He truly is a blessing

that brightens my day

it's because of my son

that I enjoy my life

in every way