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2 entries this month
 

A Kings Breath

16:24 Jun 18 2009
Times Read: 721


As with a violent exhale twisting around the Infernal Blue Light, putrid winds of void carry this horror of darkness.Fragmented disease swallows worthless sight and allows the thick shadows to suffocate at Will.A road of smashed dirt and dreams guides to this spot around from where my back faces east.Projecting out across all and cutting through to tear apart souls.Lifeless shells rot at the sounds of this breath.They bow in acceptance of their misery and the carrier of life, the King of their Death.


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Zilaheteb
Zilaheteb
18:01 Jun 18 2009

Beautiful words from my beautiful love. You always amaze me, I love you.





sculptarexdexfrumuse
sculptarexdexfrumuse
22:12 Jul 01 2009

This caught my eye. Perfect writing of a dark scene, and the imagery are really well made and authentic. You definitely have a way with words. Beautiful description on feelings. I really loved this...The way you wrote is beautiful, the words on how you spoke. I felt was rich and intreging.





Iesella
Iesella
08:51 Jul 06 2009

Always a King!





Zilaheteb
Zilaheteb
08:49 Jul 15 2009

Another breath brings more death...it is time.





 

A new sunset

15:52 Jun 10 2009
Times Read: 772


In detuned angles of pitched moonlight

shattered sunrise and it's possibility void

a moment of nothingness to come

painful bursts of dreams dissolved in blood

alone without escape

the thoughts of this bitter reflection

of mistake and loss of light

another smile warped deeply away into darkness

and now a chance at everything again...

a commitment of Will and desire

Your Darkness Will forever cover You

your heart held within

ignited in our union. Forever.


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Zilaheteb
Zilaheteb
18:05 Jun 10 2009

Nothingness fades, as lines are written,

as blood drops finding a promise of darkness.

Eternal commitment, renewed vows.

Life left behind, the morning suns rays

shine on new waves of strength.

A candles reflection burns away doubt,

by flame and fire, beautiful desire.

May darkness cover me forever more.





sculptarexdexfrumuse
sculptarexdexfrumuse
22:11 Jul 01 2009

I absolutely adore this line: "In detuned angles of pitched moonlight"



Writing is always an outlet for emotions, and what you have is a great start for a story. An intersesting use of repitition, also. May I say, your words are quite beautiful?





Iesella
Iesella
08:54 Jul 06 2009

My darkness, my love, my life.

Beautiful words take flight, forever mine.








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