As with a violent exhale twisting around the Infernal Blue Light, putrid winds of void carry this horror of darkness.Fragmented disease swallows worthless sight and allows the thick shadows to suffocate at Will.A road of smashed dirt and dreams guides to this spot around from where my back faces east.Projecting out across all and cutting through to tear apart souls.Lifeless shells rot at the sounds of this breath.They bow in acceptance of their misery and the carrier of life, the King of their Death.
In detuned angles of pitched moonlight
shattered sunrise and it's possibility void
a moment of nothingness to come
painful bursts of dreams dissolved in blood
alone without escape
the thoughts of this bitter reflection
of mistake and loss of light
another smile warped deeply away into darkness
and now a chance at everything again...
a commitment of Will and desire
Your Darkness Will forever cover You
your heart held within
ignited in our union. Forever.
COMMENTS
Nothingness fades, as lines are written,
as blood drops finding a promise of darkness.
Eternal commitment, renewed vows.
Life left behind, the morning suns rays
shine on new waves of strength.
A candles reflection burns away doubt,
by flame and fire, beautiful desire.
May darkness cover me forever more.
I absolutely adore this line: "In detuned angles of pitched moonlight"
Writing is always an outlet for emotions, and what you have is a great start for a story. An intersesting use of repitition, also. May I say, your words are quite beautiful?
My darkness, my love, my life.
Beautiful words take flight, forever mine.
COMMENTS
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Zilaheteb
18:01 Jun 18 2009
Beautiful words from my beautiful love. You always amaze me, I love you.
sculptarexdexfrumuse
22:12 Jul 01 2009
This caught my eye. Perfect writing of a dark scene, and the imagery are really well made and authentic. You definitely have a way with words. Beautiful description on feelings. I really loved this...The way you wrote is beautiful, the words on how you spoke. I felt was rich and intreging.
Iesella
08:51 Jul 06 2009
Always a King!
Zilaheteb
08:49 Jul 15 2009
Another breath brings more death...it is time.