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Loves Effect

02:53 Jul 31 2009
Times Read: 703


The smooth felt tips of your golden lips

Send me to eternal bliss

My mind begins to race

And speeds so fast I can’t keep pace



I gasp now at the shock

The embrace in which we’re locked

Has made my blood run black

This new knife in my back



And as you pull away

My body slowly sways

Blood falling like the rain

Mingled with the pain



No time to take my hold

This blade was just too cold

Smiling you twist

Groans flowing from my lips



Im left lying in a pool

Crimson bubbles running cool

And slowly you walk away

Mission accomplished today



My mind begins to rot

Body crumbling apart

Little did I expect

This travesty of Loves Effect


COMMENTS

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aidenpaige
aidenpaige
03:00 Jul 31 2009

I love your poetry its really good:)





EternalLover
EternalLover
03:12 Jul 31 2009

Wow! I think i totally like that one better than any of your others. Your very talented.








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