That inner pain of heartbreak
The distant noise of insanity
Cuts a deep as knives
Where negativity thrives
Love kills makes you lose your mind
The face they hid behind
No one to confide
Those secrets that are left behind
Scattered rewind oh how
I wish I could stop time
My life isn't mine
Just this aching shell of remorse
Of course you walk on
With your mind screaming
You wake up to another dawn
Like the one before torn
No one at your side
Who understands ....
No one ever will ....
Only the sun sea and sands
By me
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chrysanthemia
20:44 Jul 17 2009
Nicely done. The words convey the emotion quite well, and draw attention. The rhyme is wonderful.