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Tears

20:27 Jul 17 2009
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That inner pain of heartbreak

The distant noise of insanity

Cuts a deep as knives

Where negativity thrives

Love kills makes you lose your mind

The face they hid behind

No one to confide

Those secrets that are left behind

Scattered rewind oh how

I wish I could stop time

My life isn't mine



Just this aching shell of remorse

Of course you walk on

With your mind screaming

You wake up to another dawn

Like the one before torn

No one at your side

Who understands ....



No one ever will ....

Only the sun sea and sands



By me


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chrysanthemia
chrysanthemia
20:44 Jul 17 2009

Nicely done. The words convey the emotion quite well, and draw attention. The rhyme is wonderful.








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