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Blood Red Moon (the sex scene)

09:33 Jan 28 2009
Times Read: 562




Hey guys.... so this is part of the book that I'm writing at the moment. I just wrote this part 30 minutes ago. Feel free to tell me what you think.



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Ecstacy flooded through her veins. My God, Kindra wondered, what do you call this feeling? It was so addictive, so controling, she could not help but long for more. The butterflies began to flutter in her stomach. She never felt so alive.



It was like there was no such thing as time, they could make it speed up, or drag along whenever they wanted. The energy between them was so intense it was almost tangible. There was nothing outside of them. A curtain had been drawn between them and the rest of the world, and they had all the power of heaven and hell in their domain.



The pull of this power, of this energy, of him was irrestiable. The temptation was far too strong to resist. She gave in to all the wants and desires of her body. She gave, and he took. His hands, his mouth, his eyes; they all consumed her. She was lost in this wild, untamed passion that exploded within her everytime she felt his touch. His lips burned her skin, and sent ripples of pleasure crawling down her spine. There was a new sensation that she could not identify. A kind of yearning that spread through out her body. She felt hollow, and she knew that he could take that feeling away just as quicky as he created it. She wanted him. She wanted to give him the innocence that she had protected and perserved all these years.



His kisses were soft and insistant, he wasn't rushing her. But, she could feel his hunger in them. As he explored every curve and crevice of her body, he lit little fires wherever he went. Fires that burned deep into her soul. His kisses trailed down her body to her most secret of places. He lifted her legs onto his shoulders and kissed parts of her that no man had ever seen. Blood rushed to her face as she flushed with the delight of it. The effect was exhilarating. It was like shock waves were being sent through her body. She Who knew that one person could create such pleasure. She tilted her hips foward. She wanted more.



Her desire for him grew so strong in those next few moments, that she no longer controlled her body. He was taunting her. Teasing her with promises of what was to come. Just when she thought that she could no longer endure this cruel torture, just when she thought that she would explode with the pure pleasure of it, he stopped and looked up at her... and he was smiling. He knew what he had done.



His kisses returned to her lips once again. She opened herself to him, silently begging him to take what she offered. He did. Softly, almost sweetly he plunged himself into her again and again. As the pain of those first few moments faded away, she allowed herself to be swept away in the beauty of it all, and she fell deeper under his magic spell.

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Blood Red Moon ( an overview)

09:32 Jan 28 2009
Times Read: 563


Alright so I'm writing a book called Blood Red Moon. It's my first serious work. Feel free to express your opinion however you see fit.



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Kindra and Deirdre have been inseperable since they were born. They have always done everything together, after all isn't that what twins do? Now they are torn apart by a war that is centuries old. Kindra has been taken captive by the vampire Sabastian, and made his slave. However, as time passes and the war rages on, Kindra begins to see a side of Sabstian that she never expected. Deirdre, now on her own for the very first time, sits inside the lair of the beast who calls himself Gabriel. Taken from her sister, Deirdre is faced with a decision that will either kill her or save all of mankind.



Sabastian has long since awaited the coming of the one that would bring victory to his coven of vampires, and now he has found sweet, cunning Kindra. Though she cannot see it, hidden in the very depths of her soul is the power to truely end the war with Gabriel's pack of werewolves. To unleash this power and take it as his own, Sabastian must either kill the girl that he has come to love or change her into the monster that he has become.



Gabriel is a beast, this he knows, but what he doesn't know is why Deirdre has been able to tame his raging anger. The angry, bitter human that he has taken into his lair has now become the soft spot in his own heart. The ultimate test will come when he must choose: lose the war or lose his only love.


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The Mask She Wears

10:56 Jan 27 2009
Times Read: 577


I wish I could hate you, thought Avain as Derek invaded her mind yet again. I wish I could make you feel the pain that I feel. I wish you knew what it feels like to smile and laugh, while inside you're screaming and crying. I wish you were in a room full of people who claim adore you, and not a single one of them notice that hurt look in your eyes.



Avain hated it. She hated pretending she was something that she wasn't. She hated having to act weak and human. On the outside everyone saw a beautiful, brown eyed girl with dark red hair, ivory skin, and curvy figure. They saw designer clothes and shoes. They saw what they were suppose to see. If only they could see the monster inside her. If only they knew what she was.



A shiver went up her spine as she glanced up at the moon. There was only a week left til the full moon. After that she would only have a month left to choose her mate.


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