dead stars shine
light up the sky
is any body there
does anybody care?
im starting to break
im starting to fade
leave me forever in the dark
god help ive come undone
(theres no one here
to hear me cry...)
will anyone save me from my insanity? as my mask starts to fall apart, as i lose control of my emotions.
i fall to my knees, holding my scared coverd heart, slowly my mask falls apart knowing im forever alone
god help me for ive come undone.....help me, ive come undone
save me from myself
save me before im gone
is anybody there
does anybody care
if i go insane
just kill me tonight so i wont here these voices anymore
as i walk through this darkened land, forced to wonder alone
trying to escape her screams of agony and pain
some one save me
save me please
save me from this nightmare
As i run through this shadow land
trying to escape deaths hand as he reachs for soul.
i cover my ear trying to block output the whispers of the dead, telling me to give in.....
save me now
wont someone save me from this nightmare
save me..save me please
COMMENTS
You... Save yourself...
Kinda take that from an Epik High song and changed the world "You, blame yourself" But none the less, we can not simply rely on others to save us, we have to build up the strength to save ourselves. Cold, might be, but its true. Its not easy to slowly build the confidence to do so, but once we do, then we can slowly rely on others to be there for us.
Good luck
i enjoyed your poem nice work
Speachless.....~Mina
I have learned....You cannot make someone love you, all you can do is be someone who can be loved, the rest is up to the person to realize your worth. For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it. The higher you climb on loves ladder; the harder you fall but everyone must go through a storm to get to a rainbow.~Mina
ur very talented :)
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AURORAEVE3
03:03 Sep 24 2014
very impressive
MinaDracul
06:01 Oct 01 2014
I can feel your pain in each word.~Mina
KarminaTheDarkAngel
05:22 Dec 10 2014
very deep with raw emotions