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With Words

20:16 Nov 28 2010
Times Read: 807


With Words



with words we cursed

feigned laughter

then ducked



with words we whispered

touched lips

then fucked



with words we transgressed

improvised apologies

then smirked



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Bellanova333
Bellanova333
20:48 Nov 28 2010

lol I really like this one...





VAMPIREBLONDEE
VAMPIREBLONDEE
03:44 Nov 29 2010

I like this





PAGAN
PAGAN
17:18 Dec 03 2010

and, with words you are a master :





 

Happy Black Weekend

15:33 Nov 27 2010
Times Read: 820


Happy Black Weekend Haiku



balancing presents

hand fumbling for car keys

Shit! They're locked inside


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VAMPIREBONNIE
VAMPIREBONNIE
16:21 Nov 27 2010

lol..yep...that describes it!





Bellanova333
Bellanova333
18:02 Nov 27 2010

LOL nice ; )





PAGAN
PAGAN
17:17 Dec 03 2010

hehe





 

A Journey..

15:58 Nov 25 2010
Times Read: 837


"A Journey.."



from the..



 Water

 Of

 My

 Beginning



to the..



 Ground where my

 Remains lay an

 Abandoned empty

 Vessel rotten under

 Earth







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PAGAN
PAGAN
17:17 Dec 03 2010

this is absolutely stunning, its my favourite





 

Chalk

15:24 Nov 25 2010
Times Read: 839


Chalk-



if I had to write it down

crayons would replace pen

pencils would become chalk

a word circus would appear

each verse a performance

each stanza a ring





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VAMPIREBLONDEE
VAMPIREBLONDEE
16:11 Nov 25 2010

very awesome ! This is one of the best I have read of yours in awhile.





dabbler
dabbler
16:27 Nov 25 2010

glad you like it.





PAGAN
PAGAN
17:14 Dec 03 2010

:) brilliant



 

Contemplating

16:04 Nov 24 2010
Times Read: 841


this Non-phenomenal atmosphere

surrounds a calm glacier lake

perfect for contemplation


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PAGAN
PAGAN
17:12 Dec 03 2010

the perfect picture





 

My Scar

17:41 Nov 21 2010
Times Read: 854


Burn your resources to curse me

I remain unfazed

see this scar

its been here longer then your plot





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PAGAN
PAGAN
17:11 Dec 03 2010

battled but not beaten :)





 

Life Accelerated

16:07 Nov 21 2010
Times Read: 858


Life Accelerated



pulses pumping

we're a blur

passing timid lovers

putt putting along

we are destined for

a mattress crash

twisted in carnal poses

love accelerated





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dabbler
dabbler
16:08 Nov 21 2010

I was interrupted by damn Witnesses while writing this errr!!!





VAMPIREBONNIE
VAMPIREBONNIE
19:27 Nov 21 2010

aah yes...what a destiny ! *wink





dabbler
dabbler
19:46 Nov 21 2010

I just wish I was able to write it as I originally had it mentally drafted.





VAMPIREBLONDEE
VAMPIREBLONDEE
21:52 Nov 22 2010

I know the feeling..I have lost the train of thought on wonderful poems before too. I am sure it will come back to you :)





PAGAN
PAGAN
17:10 Dec 03 2010

pretty hot :)





 

Recycled Fears

16:18 Nov 20 2010
Times Read: 870


Recycled Fears



petty and perpetual

how contrived

giddy kiddies

in need of cheap spooks

pretending shaded eves

are darkened realities


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VAMPIREBONNIE
VAMPIREBONNIE
16:20 Nov 20 2010

Those searching for cheap thrills of pretend spooks are indeed, kiddies,lol





PAGAN
PAGAN
17:09 Dec 03 2010

very true





 

Shame Not I

15:38 Nov 20 2010
Times Read: 877


in me you see

grimy hand man

eater of refuse

scowl etched face



huddle to your leisure fears

crafted to allow you

to claim petty victories



while the wretched

watch with smiles

and indifference


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VAMPIREBONNIE
VAMPIREBONNIE
15:58 Nov 20 2010

You writer better than anyone I have ever known!





PAGAN
PAGAN
17:08 Dec 03 2010

is it possible to improve upon perfection? yes this is it





 

Shame Not I

15:32 Nov 20 2010
Times Read: 881


-Shame Not I-



grimy hand man

scowl faced

posed to exterminate



shame not I

feasting upon refuse

shuns leisure





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VAMPIREBLONDEE
VAMPIREBLONDEE
15:34 Nov 20 2010

You ashamed of anything? Never,never ! Not my Dabble Do :)





PAGAN
PAGAN
17:05 Dec 03 2010

perfectly put





 

Hell-ish Haiku

00:00 Nov 19 2010
Times Read: 887


1.

septic swimming pool

keep your head above the muck

by dunking others





2.

dry ice spurred terrain

blazing magnesium rain

fetid winds bellow


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VAMPIREBONNIE
VAMPIREBONNIE
00:51 Nov 19 2010

Another cool write from the Dabblemeister :)





PAGAN
PAGAN
17:04 Dec 03 2010

hellish good





 

Looney

18:54 Nov 17 2010
Times Read: 895


off a rocker

sprung coil

a jolly tad unhinged



free from conformity

without a box

to contemplate normalcy

beyond touched

outright bonkers



flipping insane

jacket tightened

wall bouncer





so much without ado

my flight is here

for permanent holiday

no need to drive

I can easily skip there


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VAMPIREBONNIE
VAMPIREBONNIE
15:50 Nov 18 2010

ok my love...are we going crazy today or saving that for the whole holiday season? lol





PAGAN
PAGAN
17:02 Dec 03 2010

freedom :)





 

Once Speachless

17:48 Nov 09 2010
Times Read: 920


tongue tied lover

hindered passion

why so silent?



tis' not embarrassment

twas' refrain



my love you

and I, Art'!



let all that hear

now knowth

VB and I

Art'



as paste is to paper

gas is to flame

like verses to poetry

together

we Art'.



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VAMPIREBONNIE
VAMPIREBONNIE
20:45 Nov 09 2010

We be a Picasso original...





dabbler
dabbler
20:50 Nov 09 2010

there you go





Bellanova333
Bellanova333
20:51 Nov 09 2010

awwww sweet (:





PAGAN
PAGAN
17:01 Dec 03 2010

no mere words could do this justice, its beautiful





 

She Saw A Ghost

15:36 Nov 06 2010
Times Read: 936


-She Saw A Ghost-



she spied a phantom

adrift in Limbos halls

resigned to existence

unaligned



she captivated a geist

afloat in static corridors

memories left to fade

untethered



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VAMPIREBONNIE
VAMPIREBONNIE
15:39 Nov 06 2010

:)



very awesome poem in a neat little package





PAGAN
PAGAN
15:47 Nov 06 2010

as always, the words just work beautifully





dabbler
dabbler
17:49 Nov 09 2010

VB, and that ghost you inspire so much.





VAMPIREBLONDEE
VAMPIREBLONDEE
04:03 Nov 16 2010

Thank you my Dabble Do :)





 

Little Sparks

15:47 Nov 05 2010
Times Read: 955


a kindled mass we were

set ablaze by flint

fanned by passions wind

to become a furnace

a warm retreat from chills

still the fires stoked

to forge intensity

forging steel bindings

that we wear willingly


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DecadentDebauchery
DecadentDebauchery
16:30 Nov 05 2010

I like this ; )





PAGAN
PAGAN
16:43 Nov 05 2010

Beautiful. Art in words





VAMPIREBLONDEE
VAMPIREBLONDEE
16:53 Nov 05 2010

aaah....I like it my love





dabbler
dabbler
16:57 Nov 05 2010

Thank you








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