why do you tourment me so with your eyes of jade and your heart of gold?
your feathery blonde hair and your perplexing stare
but why have you forgotten me?
you flirted and flattered me with your sweet talk
about my beautiful eyes of blue and my long brown hair of brown satin
telling me you loved me
saying i was your juliet and you were my romeo
well thats changed since you found yourself a new juliet
it's hard to get over you
but like juliet i'm dead now dead and forever forgotten
my heart yearns for your warm embrace
but my heart says stay away
conflicting emotions
overwhelming feelings in my heart
darklight brightly dark like nite and day
why do i feel this way?
my heart torn so badly in need of repair under construction
in darkness despair
i'll carry on but you'll still be there
impairing my judgment like cheap champane
thats what u feel like to me now
a never ending hangover
leaving the foul taste of remorse and regret
from inside
COMMENTS
i like this one too
This is really good!
I love it
another great one, very intreging.
the love that has been tainted
leaves behind its bitter stains of rememberance.
forever splintering the present.
well done my sister.
thump thump
theres no way this can be real
thump thump
i can feel
thump thump
i feel my heart
thump thump
it's actually real
why does it beat so fast when i see him?
thump thump thump
does he hear it?
thump thump thump
is that why he stares at me with such ferocity
in his eyes?
thump thump thump
why does he make me feel so shy?, and his eyes, oh his eyes
thump thump thump thump
they penetrate the very thin walls of my fragile heart
thump thump thump thump
theres tears in my eyes as he touches my face so softly
thump thump thump thump
he stares in to my eyes as his lips edge closer
to mine
thump thump thump thump thump
my hearts going to pound out of chest ,
i fell his cool breath along my lips
thump thump thump thump thump
i can only take so much
thump thump thump thump thump
then he presses his lips to mine
thump ..........
thump .....
thump...
mmmmmmm
COMMENTS
first kiss, can only image. ^^
very good ^_^
keep up the good writing ^_^
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vampiregothchick
16:29 Jul 06 2009
very moving, i like it!
animeXkikei
09:14 Jul 08 2009
This is so true! So much emotion in it as well
Beautiful ^_^
Vampfan1
10:13 Jul 19 2009
aww, it is said, but i like it, very interesting.
unknown
02:46 Aug 09 2009
lovely.
ladyofthenight
02:06 Aug 12 2009
very nice but i'll always love ya
~your mom ^_^
VampireLover91
09:58 Aug 12 2009
I know exactly how you feel! =**
This is absolutely beautiful. I'm certainly adding your journal to my favorite's list! =)