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My rainbow

02:38 Apr 23 2012
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Wishes she had that kind of love that lasts forever, the kind that makes a bitter woman better. She had it once, but then faded away. Wish someone had told me to appreciate what i got, never imagined my rainbow would end up as someone else's golden pot. Now i sit here on a rainy day cold and lonely, with no one to wrap their arm's around and hold me....



Just something that randomly popped into my head, thought i would share it with you guys :)

Feel free to tell me what u think... don't be afraid to hurt my feelings. i take criticism as a good thing only to better myself...


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Become
Become
19:08 May 10 2012

Not much criticism to offer, just this: nicely written and well said.








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