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The murder

20:29 Aug 21 2011
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She'd done it. She'd killed him.

Now she sat there staring at the bloodstains on the floor.

It was simple, really. She'd been tired of the beatings he'd been giving her. She'd put up with so much shit.

Then she'd finally snapped. Walking into her boyfriend's apartment, she'd had a knife hidden behind her back. When she'd gone in for a hug, she'd pierced the blade through his back. His eyes had gone wide and the last word he uttered was "Why?"

Hell to that! He should know why. He'd beat her and beat her to the point of bruising. Those were on the nights he was dead drunk. On the nights when he was sober, he'd beat her, and claw her, and do horrific things. She'd come home bleeding and bruised. She became grateful on the nights he was drunk. He couldn't keep enough focus to hit her when he was drunk.

So finally, she'd killed him.



Now she spoke to herself, "Me. Alison. I'm a killer."

For some awful reason a sinister smile spread across Alison's mouth.

She'd been so brilliant! Nobody would ever guess it'd been her who'd done the job .... Alison went to the kitchen and washed her hands to get the blood off.



Then Alison called the police.

If no one reported her dead boyfriend missing, the police would suspect her.

While she waited for the police to come, Alison thought of how clever she'd been. All she simply had to do was stab him, drag him out of the apartment into the woods behind the house, and change out of her bloody clothes.



When the police arrived, Alison was crying fake tears. She sobbed to the police, "I just came to see him...and...there was the blood!"

The police comforted her.

A policeman waited with Alison as the others followed the blood trail.

That's when Alison heard the voice.

It was the last word her boyfriend had uttered.

'Why!?"

It came as a shout. It made her jump. Alison tried not to show her shock. She looked at the policeman. He hadn't heard the shout.... Odd...

Then Alison heard the word "Murderer"

And "Killer"

The three words kept repeating themselves.

"Why? Why? Why?"

"Murderer! Murderer! Murderer!"

"Killer! Killer! Killer!"



Alison started to hyperventilate.



Right before the police walked in with the dead body, she heard one of the words one last time.

"KILLER!!!!"

It screamed.





When the police opened the back door with the body covered, Alison jumped off the couch.





The guilt had taken over.

"IT WAS ME!" Alison shouted. "It was me, it was me, it was me!!!" She shouted again. "I KILLED HIM!!"





Then the police took her away, along with her dead boyfriend


COMMENTS

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Angelus
Angelus
00:06 Sep 05 2011

emotive. I liked this.





PsyVamp
PsyVamp
03:21 Oct 01 2011

wow thats crazy!!! did this really happen?








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