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Boning Knife

23:47 Dec 18 2010
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She lit you up like a bonfire,

all tinder and smoke and flame~

The blush that flooded her breasts,

welled up like a spill of blood.

What is not love but true obsession?

The force that shares it's cradle with crime,

With fraud that does not falter,

when she asks if you could love her...

When you say that she'll always be your girl~

That cutting angle of your jaw when you swear

always, always and always

then thrusting the blade downwards,

wipe your hands clean on her blouse.


COMMENTS

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ThothLestat
ThothLestat
15:58 Dec 19 2010

you bad, bad girl!





philosopher
philosopher
20:09 Feb 17 2011

Oh... that is saucy. *grin*





Darkflint
Darkflint
22:30 Mar 02 2011

ohmy





xeSevirD
xeSevirD
21:25 Apr 09 2011

Wow! If that wasn't pitch black beautiful and hotter than Hell, I'll be damned if I can think of something that is.





Brooks91
Brooks91
02:30 Dec 09 2011

I really like this. In the literal sense, it has wonderful imagery.



'That cutting angle of your jaw when you swear

always, always and always'



Thats my favorite line.





Decalte
Decalte
20:54 Feb 09 2012

And yet, the need to end her life does not make of him a liar. It is actually easier, I think, to know eternal love for someone if you simply get that spark of their true selves and something happens before they can ever paint it with lies and selfishness. Though the poem seems sad, I find it sad for him rather than her. She's either in the afterplaces or reborn into new opportunity, and he will always feel the pain she had in that last moment, she will not...





DarkMuse
DarkMuse
22:16 Oct 05 2012

Love and death...the same

This has a sensual feel in a wicked

way, the end, the final sacrifice.



Nice:)





captainglobehead
captainglobehead
19:33 Apr 02 2013

This is amazing.








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