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Page 4 of Nuitari {the decision}

21:35 Jan 16 2009
Times Read: 658


Her life sllowly slipping away beneath the harvest moon, her eyes open to gaze into his, she can see his tears straming his face. Lycans circle around watching him fall from his pride being overwelmed compassion on one mortal being. a few speak of his weakness, others watch while feeling his sadness. Nuitari not caring what they think he lowers his mouth as his fangs extend, his voice a growl, "I can't lose you Kia, I just found you, allow me to give you my curse so you may rule by myside." Kia looks at him, her form trembling from the cold, she shakes her head no, her hand lifting to press against his cheek, "My death is only the beginning." her eyes close as her last breath escapes, beneath the moon his cry screams through the land in an echo, his form shakes wildly wishing to punish the Gods who stole her life this very night.

Just as he gazes down at her a rustling is heard, The Queen his mother swiftly moves over lowering down next to the girl, her hand reaches behind pulling the arrow out of her flesh and tosses it away. Nuitari's eyes widen, "Mother you are to late."

His mother doesnt respond as her hands fall now to the girls chest, her form now beginning to glow of a white aura, which pulsed,The lycans slowly backed away as the light of her aura only seem to beloow out around her, her eyes became Ivory like the moon, her mouth open as she lowered it over the girls mouth, now energy released from the qwueen feeding into the lifeless mortal, slowly healing engergy poured richly through her veins, filling her every vessel. her heart slowly beginning to beat as the wound now starts to close. The queens Aura starting to flicker as her energy now fills the young girl, her wounds fully closed leaving no scare, Kia's eyes open as she gasps for air leaning up, the queen swiftly backs away rising to her feet.

Nuitari reaches out embracing Kia and looks over to his mother while holding her, eyes holding a silent thank you. he rocked Kia in his embrace as the Queen spoke, "Honor does become noticed Son, not every act must be spoken of but to give a simple act of thankfulness is always better then boasting out before all to hear. you have much to learn son, you wrongfully doubted me." she then turned vanishing into the night, his tears fell as he held onto Kia, slowly she came to. her arms slid around him as she whispered,

"I am alright."

Time had passed and the Kigdom that Nuitari swore to distroy had eventually fallen by wars with other clans, he swore to Kia to never attack and kept his word. Kia eventually moved to the forest with her Beloved prince.



but thats a whole other story that I will post in time.. :) for there isnt a Happy ending everytime. I wont tell no more then that. I hope you enjoyed the Story. I will post the Second Half of Nuitarii when I have Finished my thoughts on the Sequel


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Isis101
Isis101
02:23 Jan 17 2009

Mau...I really enjoyed this story! It is very expressive - I could visualize the events clearly. I look forward to the sequel. Thank you for writing and sharing this lil' gem!





 

Part three of Nuitari {The quest for vengance}

20:47 Jan 16 2009
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The night fell so quickly, Nuitari had to lock himself away from Young Kia for he feared his own thirst for blood this night especially, little did Kia know that Nuitari was planning an attack on her homeland this evening.

His plan was to sweep over the kingdom calling forth armies of lycans to raid the Queens kingdom, nothing was to remain standing. He wanted everyone slaughtered especially the Queen. (his mother) the clouds hid the moon while the lycan armies moved through the forest at such speed to meet with the Prince who would lead them into battle, as they approached the meeting place just on the outskirts of his land the wind swept bringing the Mortals scent to their nostrils, their claws raked the ground as teeth nashed, the Prince warned them if they even thought of harming her they would pay for many generations to come. Some of the ancient of the clan growled in challenge but coward as Nuitari stepped forward, his wings ripped out from his back unfoldng in a wide spread. his eyes of Ivory glared with anger as his fangs dripped of saliva.

"Now listen to me! we are gathered here for purpose, I want my kingdom which is owed to me, leave the mortal girl alone! our plans are much more Important and our heads must stay clear if we wish victory!" his words ending wioth a deep warningful growl,

The others only backed away noit wanting to anger him. they all turned to face the direction of the Kingdom they will soon attack. As a great rushing wind they dashed forward becoming blurs of shadows, their speed was amazing but their strength far greater.



Kia stood afar ease dropping by accident, she had simply exited the cabin to gather some kendle for the fire place. her eyes filled with tears hearing the plans of Nuitari. now faced with a decision to either make her way back to the castle and warn the others which there was no way humanly possible she would reach the kingdom before them, or she could remain silent to what she knew. she had no choice once realizing what would be right, kendle fell to the ground as she dashed off into the forest, brush ripped her clothes as she pushed through them, scraping her flesh, now the scent of blood mixed with purity scented the air, yet she didnt care, she had to get to the Castle and warn them. her ebony tresses bounced wildly about her form from her quick dash. she could see the light in the distance, but where was Nuitari and his army? she questioned herself, perhaps she heard wrong?

she made it through the forest now allowing her feet to beat along the cobblestoned trail which led up to the castle doors, she stopped as she could hear a scream in the distance, her head now turned as she lookeed back to find a army of lycans moving over the land, the Queen standing out on her balcony giving orders to her army of Vampires, her hand now passing through the air signaling the order for them to now go forward.

Vampires lined the walls of the castle, their swords captured the moonlight as the clouds now passed and released the moonlight from its captivaty. Some hw they already recieved word of the upcoming war.

Nuiitari's nostrils flared as he picked up Kia's scent from the air, his eyes raped over the land till they rested on her form, his thoughts spoken out loud, "No, not her, she will be killed!"



Kia's eyes met with Nuitari's. her eyes shown her disappointment. she then opened her cloak her hands swept over her hilts while gripping them firmly. her heart raced but even if she was to die she would stand her ground and fight him and his army to save her home and the Queen she served. Lycans held back by a wave of Nuitari's hand. he stepped out beneath the shadows into the fullness of the moonlight. his beautiful form shimmered in the moonlight, his eyes filled with pain while locked to hers. the Vampires awaited watching Nuitari stepping forward. The queens eyes lowered towards Kia who stood out in the field alone, her hands holding her blades at ready. no fear written on her face.

Nuitari looked at Kia not understanding why she would defend a place that never excepted her or even acknowledged her existance. they only saw her as a servant girl, trash beneath their feet which would only be trampled to the earth and never thought twice ofd. he didnt need to ask why though, he knew her heart by the woerds they had spoken before, the words written in heart were words of a great honor that few warriors will ever grasp.



Kia moved towards Nuitari. her heart raced while her eyes stared into his, she had fallen inlove with him but knew she had no choice but to stand up for her home, although she knew she was nothing of Importance she would gladly die to protect those she served, a servants heart is the greatest act of honor yet is so unnoticed. once reachng the distance of 5 ft away from the man she fell inlove with she spoke these words to him, "Nuitari, if you and your army follow through with this then I will die trying to stop as many of you as I can. I have no choice but to protect this kingdom."



He listened to her words as his eyes narrowed. a sigh escapes in the breath of the winds, he couldnt allow her to be harmed for he had fallen inlove with her as well, he only turned looking back to his men. he signaled them to fall back.

one of the Queens men released an arrow sending it slicing through the air, Kia heard the bow being released and swiftly threw her sword outward while dashing towards Nuitari, her swords released in the air as her arms wrapped around him, he could hear the arrow now pushing through flesh as she stumbled forward, he screamed out, "No!" while turning only to catch ia in his embrace he fell to the ground the arrow plunged in her lower back area.

She had saved the very enemy she would have faught to save her home for.

Eyes of a shimmering emnerald stared into his ebony pools.

The Queen lifted her hand demanding the army to hold back. her voice loud as she yelled out, "Stop until I give you other orders!"

Kia stared into Nuitari's eyes then slowly they closed, he didnt have much time to make a decision, he could either allow her to die right here in his arms or he could turn her making her of his kind. time was running out. he hollared to his men, "Go now return back to the forest, I will meet you there in time! go now!" the others turned and fled into the forest as he scopped up Kia into his arms, he stared at his mother, the queen, "You can help her! why do you not do anything for her!?"



The queen only watched her son then turned away walking back into the kingdom, her men stayed on guard watching ready for anything to come.

Nuitari turned and left for the forest, his speed so vast never faltering till he came to a place off in the distance that had a clearing, he laid her to the ground onto her side, scared to move the arrow for it would only cause her to hemerage to death.

"Kia, please stay with me." he spoke softly staring over her, her form now becoming paled as her eyes slowly closed. her bnreath becoming shallow.

"Nuitari, I am so cold"



{continued on page four}


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Nuitari Part two

19:31 Jan 16 2009
Times Read: 667


He listened to her explanation only feeling his heart becoming filled with such a inner joy, he smiled and lowered down to a crotch infront of her. his hands layed over the tops of his thighs as he gazed into her eyes, the the question he asked next only opened the eyes of the Innocent,

"Kia, Why do you truely seek sucj a hated creature as I? I know you have heard the stories of what I am, surely someone warned you of the beast I am. I have killed many, with out any remorse. I have drained the innocent to feed my own hunger in greed. tell me why you see beauty in a beast as I?"



Kia listened to his every word, her heart racing and it felt like it was going to beat out of her chest. her lips of crimson parted as she started to speak, yet no words could surface as she stared into his blue iced eyes, seeing them to change to a glossy ebony, those eyes she saw that day which took her breath away.

she then lifted her hand placing it to his cheek, her eyes sparkled while watering with tears,

"You maybe a Killer, and perrhaps others seen you as A Beast, but I knew you from the moment I saw you. I saw the sad and alone being you were. always feeling out of place. you only hide behind your sword to escape your pain of wanting to feel love. your not a ruthless man nor a violent beast you only wish the same as I to feel excepted, loved, treasured."



her thumb caressing his cheek bone as she stared into his now teary eyes..



He lifted his hand laying it over hers, he then lowered his ebony gaze towards the ground in a pause of how to respond to such sweet words, once he thought of what to say he returned his gaze towards hers.

"Kia, you do not know me. you only assume these things. I have killed more men single handed, enough men to fill three army's. I could have any woman I wish to comfort me when i am lonely, I only prefer to be alone, for my kind it is best to stay unattached. do you understand me?"

A small tear trickled down his face finding rest at the edge of her thumb, with a simple brush if her thumb she dried his tear away. her eyes remaining to his as she leaned forward, her lips so gentle and soft applied to his forehead in a kiss. then she lowered her head moving away from his.



her words spilled from her tongue almost like an angelic hymn soothing his troubled thoughts with every word spoken to him,

"I am not one who worries what others believe. I dont see a beast or do I care of the evil you think you have done. I only know what my heart tells me and what my gut speaks of. I will not be the judge of you, for it is not my law you have broken. I am simply a spectator who admires the gentleness I see in your eyes. I see only your good, for I am blind to evil of all kinds. For I believe everything has good and bad, I only choose to see what is good and ignore the bad."

While her words speak freely a tear falls splashing his hand which lays resting on his thigh. her words so kind and so unjudgemental. he then nods understanding her heart finally for once. satisfied with her belief he found himself unable to argue with the logic she spoke. he lifted to his feet and slid his hands into hers helping her up.



what seemed to be a short time during the moments of conversing the sun began to settle, over the horizon. sunset pastels now swirled over the once blue sky, as if the artist Mother nature had carefully brushed a feather over the canvas above, the hand of a artist bringing forth all its beauty with the perfect mix of autumn colours. he knew she wouldnt have time to get back home for her distance was far, he sighed and looked over towards his cabin, "Kia you will have to stay with me tonight, if you try and leave back home the lycans will smell your scent once they fully awaken. you will be safe with me, I will get you home at dawn. My home isnt far from here I only ask you stay in doors for i will be hunting with my clan this evening as well."



Kia listened to him and understood completely. she followed close behind as he led her through the thick brush, thorns tugged at her clothing but unsuccessful at tearing through her garmets. moments later as they exited the thickness there she stood looking at the most beautiful landscape her eyes had ever seen, in the distance behind the cabin the mountains stood tall, snow capped at its peek. The sun just barely seen while it fell fastly to rest. a stream ran along he side of his cabin. a spiraling ebony- gray smoke seeped from its chimney spreading once released to the air like if it was an angel spreading its wings across the sunset sky.



{continued on page 3 }





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Nuitari

18:21 Jan 16 2009
Times Read: 677


The darkness shadowed his evil form from most sight of the others, standing in the shadows awaiting the perfect time to make his kill on the Queen of Heaven and Hell Coven.

He was a Son to the Queen but rejected for the curse he bared. Frowned upon for the tragedy he had no control over. He held to curses, one being Vampire and the other Lycan, a half breed.

While he readied himself reaching beneath his cloak to grasp a dagger a soft hand swept along the side of his face. There he was face to face with one who was of pure innocence. A human, more beautiful then anyt he had ever seen. a growl escaped him as his wings folded behind him. warning this child to leave him be.

The girl never seen such a creature continued to stroke the side of his face, she softly whispered to him, "DO not be afraid, I wont harm you. Your so beautiful. Can I keep you?" her soft gaze retaining a hue of emerald. her pale skin showing her youth and purity. she was simply flawless, like a rose at half bloom. Kissed with a morning dew.

The creature amused how she would think that she could harm him or even to think that he thought she would harm him softened his emotions towards her. his growl now ceasing to a silence.

The young girl continued to caress his face admiring his glossy ebony eyes. the darkness they held only drew her to more curiousity.

Those who watched did not bother the girl or warn her. they only looked away pretending she didnt exist.

The Werepyer noticed their coldness towards this girl. why would they hate a child of such pure innocense, a heart that could love the worst of all creatures and only find it's beauty?



The Queen entered the room seeing the young girl in the darkness with the beast and called her name, "Kia, who are you speaking too.?"



As Kia turned to see the Queen the creature vanished from the darkness not leaving any trace of his exsistance.

Kia turned feeling the chill of the darkness now filling the spot where he once was. she sighed lowering her head while responding to the Queen, "I dont know who he was ma'am I just know he was beautiful and now gone."



The queen then nodded and continued on her observations throughout her kingdom.

Kia then felt so alone once more. the question only still to run through her mind of who was this creature, where did he come from.? questions she doubt to ever find the answers to.



Days seem to pass by like they were only seconds, and she wondered of him, there was soemthing in his dark eyes she saw but couldnt understand the vision she was given. Little did she know he watched over her at night as she slept, perhaps protecting her, or could it be he only hungered for the taste of her sweet nectar. her blood he could easily enduldge of as if it was a sweet wine. yet there was something about her passionate heart that captivated him, taming the beast within him.



His Human form being known as Nuitari. He was extremely rich, powerful and quite a prince, but known as a ruthless killer who could not be trusted. He found himself falling for this girl more and more as days passed, watching her sleep, how her curls spread over her pillow, the smile she held on her face while she visited her place of dreams. He even heard her laugh in her sleep plenty of times. He wondered what made her laugh like that finding himself for the first time ever smiling.

Early Morning the fog lifted as the dew dripped off the tree's leaves, splashing like a soft morning shower. Kia's eyes opened as she lifted from her bed. she smiled staring out her window looking to the forest. she had decided in her dreams she would find him once more. she had to know or it would only drive her to her madness.

she quickly bathed and dressed warm. she slipped out before the others could awake and call on her to serve them. her hair pulled neatly back into a ponytail, a black cloak draped over her emerald gown.

Her walk was a short one as she entered the forest. Ivy Twisted up the tall trees, while the full branches shadowed the trail in an arch over head. the creek that rushed under the foot bridge seemed a bit higher tnen normal, due to the snow melting from the northern mountains.

The smell of the forest was so fresh and the air was still crisp with a cool breeze.

It seemed like hours had passed as she trailed along the path, she saw so many creatures along the way yet none were the one she seeked for.

she grew a bit hungry but refused to turn back. as the day continued she grew tired. SHe came to rest on a log which had fallen from a recent storm, the splintered trunk still seeping its sap, while its appearance still remained fresh. she sat down staring up at the tiny beams of sunlight that forced its way through the many branches over head. Off in the distance behind her Nuitari was hunting for his breakfast. by day his form was completely human. something drew his attention towards where Kia sat. He silently moved through the shadows of the trees to get closer. his heart pounded as he watched her.



Such innocense Surely had no place in such a dangerous place he thought to himself.



Kia sat there smiling as she watched the clouds swwp over the sunlight which forced the beams to disappear only to return as the clouds passed over. she heard rustling behind her and turned to see what it was which made the leaves turn and twigs snap. there she saw this man, her eyes locked onto his, her heart pounded.. she couldnt even scream for her breath had quickened with a panic. yet something about those eyes which returned her gaze seemed so familar. she didnt move a muscle as he stepped around the tree he hid behind.

with ahead held high he stepped forward towards her. his cloak dancing behind him in a rippling bellow. his long locks teasing his shoulders in a wide spill that seemed to never end its stretch down his back. the closer he got the more her heart raced, yet she was intregued. her words so few and quite shakey,



"who.. are, you? How is it i know you sir?"

He didnt answer her question but only asked one in return, "Why are you so far from home, do you not realize how dangerous this place is?"

A smile placed over his lips as his gaze searched over her elegant form, then returned back onto her. she lowered her head as she responded to his question,

"I search for something but I am unsure if it was only a dream I had while I was awake. Something I saw more beautiful then all of the creatures that walk this land."

Hewr eyes traversed as she lifted her head returning her emeral gaze back onto his.



he listened to her words and smiled deep down inside excited and pleased knowing what she speaks of.

"I see, well surely this creature you seek must be real if you are willing to risk your life to find it. why do you wish to find him again?"



Kia tilted her head not giving this man a gender to the creature and taking notice that he spoke in the nature of knowing its gender. her eyes still locked to his she softly speaks,

"I never stated it was male or female, and the reson I wish to find him is because I am curiously fascinated with him. I dream of him even at night. I awake thinking of only him and wondering if he is alright. I must find him just to know he is truely alright."



{conclusion on seperate page}


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