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Vampires in the Attic 'Part 2'

07:03 Jul 15 2007
Times Read: 674


Continuation;..



"Well, lets just say, we hunt these creatures...." said Amanda. "So, what? You two are vampire hunters?" asked Jane. "Yes....we are," Ashley says, looking at Jane. "Ok, I think it's time for you two to leave now...." Jane replies. "Fine, but before we go, I must warn you, Morbius is not like the others, he is the first of the vampiric race, and he can travel during daylight, so I urge you to be careful..." Amanda says, as they both walk out of Jane's house. Jane closes the front door, and sits back at the table, finishing her cup of coffee. She hears nothing but silence around the house, as she puts her cup in the sink, and heads back up to her bedroom. Crawling underneath the covers on her bed, she closes her eyes; resting them. Morbius, slowly and quietly, walks into the bedroom. He smiles as he sees her laying on the bed. Morbius crawls onto the bed slowly, and gently pulls down the covers off of Jane. "What are you doing?" Jane asked, looking at Morbius. "Don't tell me that you don't want me, Jane?" he asked her. Jane bit her bottom lip, "I do,...but..." "But nothing," he cuts her off, and slowly unties the front of her nightgown, pushing the sides down; exposing her voluptuous breasts. Morbius kisses her deeply, massaging her breasts in his hands, as he moves his lips to her neck, nibbling softly. Jane runs her fingers through his hair, as he does this. He then brings his lips down to her breasts and sucks on each nipple softly, hearing Jane let out a little moan. Moving down inbetween her legs, he licks at aching clit; hearing her moan some more. Jane becoming all hot and bothered, Morbius comes up to her, and kisses her passionately, once more; then vanishing into thin air. "Morbius?!?" Jane sits up, seeing no one. "God damn him!!" she yells, and gets out of bed. Getting changed for the day, she walks down stairs wearing her black boots, black leather pants, and a black shirt. "Michael!?!?" she yells again. Hearing nothing in response, she opens the front door; walking outside. "Michael!!" she yells, and notices a small amount of blood, stained on the front step. Jane walks out into the street, grey skies surrounding the small town. Trees swaying as the wind blows past her, and the leaves carry themselves down the street. "Michael!?!?" she yells louder, hearing no response. The town seemed like no one lived here, as if, it was a ghost town. Jane looked around, seeing some more blood stains on the street, heading towards the neighbors house. She walks over to the side of the house, and sees Michaels pale body in a pool of blood. "Oh my god!!!....Michael!!!" she says and runs back across the street into her house. Jane slams the front door shut, and walks up her stairs, heading for the attic. Climbing up the attic stairs, she yells for Morbius but he doesn't respond. Reaching the top, she eyes the six coffins that lay near at the other end of the attic. Jane sits on the floor and leans against the wall. As she waits for them to wake, she falls asleep; only to wake up with the vampire elder hovering over her. "I thought I told you to get out!?!?" the elder yelled loudly. "Where is Morbius?!?!" Jane shouted. The elder looked at Jane in rage, "Why does it matter to you!?" he aks and throws her against the wall. Jane hits her back and falls to the floor. "Leave her be!!" Morbius yells, climbing the attic stairs. "But master, she and her husband are in our house, they must not live!!" the elder yells at Morbius. Morbius looks at the vampire, "I have already taken care of the husband! Jane is mine, do not touch her!" Jane looks over at Morbius as he walks towards her, "You murderer!! You killed Michael!!" "He didn't love you Jane, not like I do, and you know it!" Morbius responds. Jane looks down at the attic floor, when Morbius leans down to her, "Please be by my side.....forever." Jane nods and Morbius leans in, gently sinking in his sharp fangs. The others watch as Morbius takes Jane's life from their very eyes.

After a few seconds, Morbius stands back up, and watches as Jane's body slowly dies. She rises with a thirst for blood, "Give me more!" she says, her hungry eyes glaring at Morbius. He smiles, and takes her hand, "How about we have a feast with those two young girls?" "Finally! I have been dying to feed from them!" the other vampire smiles and laughs. "Not you, you fool!....Only her and I are going to feast, it's her first kill...." Morbius says, smiling at Jane. Morbius takes Jane into his arms, and vanishes into thin air. Amanda and ashley are sitting quietly inside of their cozy home, infront of the tv, when they hear something hit the roof. "What the hell was that?" Ashley asked, looking up at the ceiling. "Probably an animal, don't worry about it," replied Amanda. Ashley gets off of the couch and walks into the kitchen. Opening the fridge, she hears someone walking down the stairs, "Amanda!?!" "Now what!?" Amanda yelled, walking into the kitchen. "Nice to see you again, Amanda!" Morbius says baring his fangs. Ashley struggles to get free of Morbius's tight grip, feeling a sharp knife being put to her throat, "I wouldn't move if I were you...." Morbius says to Ashley. He leans down and licks at Ashleys neck...."Tasty,..just like the last time..." "You asshole!..You don't want her,..you want me,...i'm the one who killed your lover!!" Amanda yells at him. Morbius growls..."You may have killed my last lover,..but you have yet to meet my new one!!" Jane appears behind Amanda, and violently throws her against the kitchen wall. Amanda picks herself back up..."What the hell!" Jane laughs,.."You thought i'd always be mortal?..The day you came to my house, warning me to stay away from Morbius,..I had already wanted him..." "Good,...that means I can kill you both!" Amanda says looking at Jane. "Yeah,...i'd like to see you try...." Jane says, licking her fangs. Morbius sinks his fangs into Ashley's neck. Ashley screams in agony. Amanda runs for Morbius with a stake in hand, "Get off of her!!" Jane grabs Amanda by the wrist and twists her arm, hearing her cry out in pain. Throwing Amanda against the wall once more, Jane lunges at her, and sinks her fangs into the side of Amanda's neck. Morbius drops Ashleys lifeless body, and walks over to Jane telling her to stop. "Why?" Jane asked. Amanda looks up to Morbius,.."Mercy, please..." He laughs, "You're asking me for mercy?" Morbius leans down to Amanda and breaks her neck. "Well, that was too easy..." Jane said, smiling. ""Yes, it was, wasn't it," he replied, then taking Jane into her arms, and once again disappears into thin air, only to reappear back into the attic. "So now what?" Jane asked him. Morbius looks at her,.."Well my love, now we wait..." "For what?" she asked. He smiles, "For more hunters to come! But until then,..we will wait in the attic with the other vampires...." Jane smiles and climbs into the coffin with morbius,..falling into an everlasting dream...



~The End~


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Vampires in the Attic

06:42 Jul 15 2007
Times Read: 677


Jane and Michael have been married for four years now, when they had just moved into their new house in Sparta, Illinois. Nice cozy place it was, but the small town had many secrets. It was a very small population as well, but Jane insisted she loved the beautiful red and black house. It was at least four stories high, Victorian style, with trees surrounding it. The original owners of the house vanished, no one knows what happend to them. Everyone in the town believes the house is haunted by vampires, for at least three people a night are killed.



"Michael!?" Jane yelled from the kitchen. "Yes darling?" Jane looked at him with tears streaming down her face, "They broke my mothers vase!" "I'm sure we can just glue it back together," he says laughing a little. "It's not funny! She gave me this before she died." "I'm sorry about the vase Jane," he says, hugging her. Jane hugged him tightly when someone knocked on the front door. Michael walked into the front hall, and opened the the front door, "Can I help you?" Two women stayed infront of him, one with apple pie, and the other with homemade cheese cake, "I'm Amanda, and this is Ashley, we wanted to welcome our new neighbors," Amanda said with a smile. "I'm Michael, and my wife Jane is in the kitchen, would you like to come inside?" The two women looked at Michael with a bit of puzzlement, "N....No, that's ok, we are fine right where we are," said Ashley. "Jane! Come here and help me please," Michael yelled. "Yes darling?" asked Jane. Ashley and Amanda looked at Jane, "We were just welcoming you and your husband to the neighborhood, and we brought you some apple pie, and also cheesecake." Jane smiled, "How thoughtful of you, won't you come inside for a while?"



Ashley and Amanda look at each other, and they decide to come inside, "Yes, but only for a little bit." Michael and Jane move out of the door way. Ashley and Amanda walk inside looking around, "Wow this place is nice, I haven't been in here for years," said Amanda. Jane looked at Amanda, "You guys have been here before?" "Yes, when we were younger, a rich family used to live here, and I was friends with one of their daughters, but see, after the children went missing, the family moved out," replied Amanda. "What do you think happend to the children?" Michael asked. Ashley looks at him, "Some say they were murdered, others say vampires have been living in the attic of this house for centuries, and that they took the children." Amanda shoves Ashley, "Don't tell them such stories! You'll scare them."



The wind outside picks up as they all continue their conversation inside, the sun starting to set. "Vampires??" Jane asked them. "Yes, vampires, you know, immortals with fangs?" Ashley laughed. "Nonsense, vampires don't exist, i'm sure something else just happend to those kids," Jane said. Amanda starred at Jane, "You never know, they could exist, afterall, we have at least 3 killings every night in this town." Michael looks at the two girls, "Ok, enough talk about vampires please, who wants some cheesecake?" "I'm afraid we have to go, we never stay out past dark," replies Amanda. "Ugh, no cheesecake?" Ashley whines. "No...we must leave now, before they wake..." demands Amanda. Ashley pouts her lip at Amanda, but gets up and heads for the front door with her. "Will you guys stop by sometime soon?" asked Jane. "Sure," Amanda smiled and they walked out of the house, closing the door behind them. "What strange people we have in our town Jane," said Michael. Jane laughed, "Vampires my ass! They don't exist." Michael walked into the kitchen, Jane followed, "You don't seriously believe them do you?" Jane asked. "No, but they seemed to be really afraid of this house, Jane." She laughed a little, "Well get unafraid, and come help me unpack our things in our bedroom." "I'll be up in a minute hun, start without me."



Jane nods and walks up the stairs, walking down the hall and into the master bedroom. She unpacks a few of their things when she hears footsteps on the ceiling above her. "Janeeeee......" a voice calls out to her. Jane turns around, "Who's there??" "We're hungry Jane...." the voice sounded again, only this time, it was a more hungryish tone. Jane starts screaming for Michael. "Whats wrong??" Michael yells, running up the stairs and into the bedroom. "I heard voices! I think someone is in our house Michael!!" Michael walked over to her,..."Nonsense, this house has been empty for years, you're probably just hearing things." Jane sits down on the bed, "You don't believe me, do you?" "Of course I do hunny, but cmon, do you really think there are vampires in this house?" "No, but...I really heard voices," she replies. Michael hugs Jane tightly, when the power goes out throughout the house, "Damnit, stay here Jane, i'll go turn the lights back on." Jane sits on the bed in the darkness, wishing Michael didn't leave her alone. She hears footsteps walking across the ceiling above their bedroom again. Looking up at the ceiling, the bedroom door opens....a dark figure walks inside the room, "Michael?" Jane calls out. The dark figure snickers, "I think not..." Jane starts screaming, Michael hearing this, he comes running back to the bedroom, only to find Jane gone. "Jane!!!???" Michael yells, hearing nothing in response. The dark figure carries Jane's knocked out body up the attic stairs, and throws her down onto the floor. Four other figures come out of from the shadows of the attic, "Why did you bring her up here!?" the elder spoke. "They are a threat to this house! It's our's!" the dark figure says. Jane wakes up, looking around the room, "Where am I?" The elder looks at her, "You are in my house....." Jane looks at him with a confused face, "Your house? We just moved in." The elder turns on the light in the room, flashing his fangs at her, "This is my house!! You humans are not welcome here!!" The other three vampires walk towards her when she speaks,.."OMG, you two are those children that went missing aren't you??" They tilt their head, looking at her weirdly, "Children of the night, we are now, and you, our cattle." "Now, now children," the elder said, "We will let her go with a warning, if she and her husband does not leave this house by morning, she will be damned along with us! Do I make myself clear, Jane?" Jane swallows hard in fear, "Y..Yes." The dark figure who carried her to the attic, brings her into the living room, he then disappears. "Michael!?" she yells loudly, starting to cry. Happy to hear her voice, Michael runs into the living room, seeing Jane in a pool of tears, "What happend??" "Vampires.....they are in the attic Michael, we must get out, or else, they will make me one of them, and kill you..." Michael looks at her, "What?" "You heard me Michael!! Can we please leave this house?" Jane asked. "Jane, we can't leave, I just transfered to a job here, we can't just up and leave like that! Look I promise you nothing will happen to us, ok?" "But Michael, we can't stay," she replies. "Yes, we fucking can, and we will! I'm not going to let a bunch of vampires control us!!" Jane looks down at the floor, continuing to cry, "You'd risk the life of your wife?" "Hunny, it's not that, ok? It's just, you wanted this house, I paid a lot for this house, we are not leaving, ok?" he asked her. "Fine, but don't say I didn't warn you...." she says, storming out the front door. "Jane where are you going!?" Michael yelled. "For a walk, and don't follow me!" Michael sighs and close the door, sitting down onto the couch. Jane walks down the street, the wind blows softly across her skin, her long brown hair flowing with it. She wipes her tears, listening to the trees swaying as she walked passed them. "A little late to be out for such a young lady, is it not?" a voice behind her spoke. Jane turned around, "I needed some fresh air...." The darkly figured man walked up to her, the moon light shines down on his long black hair. She could see his face perfectly, his bright green eyes, and pale skin. "I am, Morbius, and you are M'lady?" "Jane, my name is Jane." Morbius smiled at her, "A lovely name for a beautiful woman, such as yourself." Jane blushes, "I like your name as well." "So why, are you out here all alone?" Morbius asked her. Jane frowned a little, "I had gotten into a fight with my husband, it seems to me, that i'm not important to him anymore." Morbius looks at her, "Your husband is a fool then." Jane looked at him, "Sometimes I wonder why I even married him," she says looking down at the ground. Morbius holds her chin up, smiling at her, "Another will come along...." "Another?" she asked him. He laughed, "Yes, another, you will fall for another man...," he says smiling, "I know what you lust for Jane, your darkest desire." Morbius pushes her back up against a tree, "I know what lies in your heart." The wind picks up, Jane looks at him, "What lies in my heart? What is my darkest desire?" Morbius grabs her butt, bringing her in closer to him, "You yearn to be with someone like me," he says, running his fangs across her neck. Jane lets out a little moan, running her fingers through his long hair, "What else?" Morbius looks at her, "I know that you yearn to be like one of them." "One of them?" she asked. "I know that they brought you into the attic Jane! I was not there, but I am one of them," he says, squeezing her ass with his hands. "Y...You want me dead...." she says trembling. "No, the others want you dead, but I won't allow it...." he says to her, "After all, I am the one who made them..." Morbius leans down and kisses Jane deeply, massaging his tongue with hers, biting her bottom lip, with his fang, and drawing some blood, "Mmmm so sweet your blood is." "Jane!!!!" Michael yells. Jane shakes her head, as if she was dreaming. Morbius was no where in sight. Michael runs up to her, "Don't leave me like that again! Do you hear me? I was so worried."



"You were worried about me?" Jane asked him, "You don't care about me,..you never did!" Michael tries to hug her, but jane pushes him away, "What is your problem?" he asked. She snickers at him, "My problem is that you never cared about my life...." she says walking back towards the house. "That's fucking nonsense Jane!! I love you and you know that," he replies. "You don't love me Michael,..." she says, feeling drops of rain fall onto her skin. Michael grabs her arm, "Don't you ever say that again....I do love you and thats the truth!." She pulls her arm loose, and walks up the front steps of the house, going inside. Michael follows behind her, Morbius watching in the distance. "Jane...." Michael looks at her. "Don't talk to me!" she yells, "I'm going to bed, goodnight, you can sleep on the couch!" She storms up the stairs, and into the bedroom. Michael slams the front door. Morbius rings the doorbell. Opening the door, Michael sees no one, "Hello!?" He walks outside, and the front door slams shut. "What the hell?" Michael says trying to get back into the house. "Jane, open up!! I locked myself outside!!" he says banging on the front door, but Jane doesn't come. "She is mine now...." Morbius says, grinning at Michael. "What? Who are you?" Michael looks around. "Your worst nightmare," Morbius says, lashing out at him, holding him tightly while he sinks his fangs into Michael's neck. Michael gasps trying to knock Morbius off of him. "It is useless to struggle," Morbius says in Michael's mind. Morbius feels Michael's body go limp in his arms, dragging his body across the street, and leaving it beside the neighbors house. The next morning Jane wakes up, opening the drapes that covers her windows. She walks down the stairs, wearing her nightgown, and walks into the kitchen, making herself some coffee. "Michael??" she yelled, but no response. Thinking nothing of it, she walks to the front door and opens it, picking up her newspaper. "Hey Jane!!" Ashley yells, "How was your night in the new house?" Not remembering much of last night, she responds, "Oh you could say it was quite alright," Jane says with a smile. Amanda smiles, "I bet it was." "Would you two like some coffee?" Jane asked them. They both shrug their shoulders, "Sure, why not," and walk into her house. Jane walks in, closing the door. "So where is Michael?" Amanda asked Jane. "To be honest, I don't know, I woke up and he was gone," Jane replies. "They probably got him," Amanda said. "They?" Jane asked. "Yes, you know, the vampires in the attic," replies Ashley. "I saw you with Morbius last night...." says Amanda. "Morbius?" "Yes, the head vampire, he is the one who made the others," Amanda replies to Jane, "And I see that he wants you to be by his side...." "How do you know all of this?" Jane asked them both.







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What Anton Wanted

04:42 Jul 05 2007
Times Read: 695


(one of my old short stories)



It was a dark cold night, the wind was howling and the streets of Los Angelos were flooded with mortals. One in partictular was Helena Beckens. She had straight black hair that went past her shoulders. She had just turned 20 years old, and was in college. How do I know this? I take a few classes with her. To her, I am what she would call 'a best friend'.

My name is Anton, and I am what most mortals fear, a vampire. I have desired to have Helena since I first laid eyes on her and tonight I am going to get what I want...



Helena stops at the crosswalk and waits for the light to turn green.

A few others wait with her.

The light turns green, and they all cross the street. Helena, sees a short cut and debates wether or not to walk down the dark alley way, but since she is already late, she takes the short cut. Trash cans rolled around on the ground, as she walks by them.

Anton makes a whistling sound.

"Hello?" Helena looks around, as she walks faster. Anton walks out from the shadows infront of Helena, "Don't be afraid, it's only me..." Helena looked at him, "Anton, what are you doing here? I thought you would of been in class already." Anton smiles, a bit of his fangs showing. "Omg!" Helena says, as she backs away from him.

Anton moves closer to her, when she screams loudly. He covers her mouh quickly, "Shhh my love, I won't hurt you." Anton looks at her with a smile, "Now, I will uncover your mouth, but do not scream." Helena shakes her head, and he releases his hand from her mouth. "What do you want from me?" she asks him, watching as his hands moved down to the button of her jeans.

"I want you Helena, your blood, oh how your blood would be so warm, how it smells so sweet."

Anton pushes her slightly up against the brick wall. "Please Anton, don't do this," she says in a soft voice. Anton leans down and kisses her softly on her neck, but before he sinks his fangs in, a light shines on them, "Hey you!! Stop right there!" a police man yelled. Helena looks at the officer, and turns back to Anton, who was now gone.

The police officer rushes over to Helena, "Are you alright miss?" She looks at him, "I'm fine, but I need a ride home." The police officer nods his head, and leads her to his car.

"Who was he miss?" he asked her. "Who?" she replied. "The man who was with you, I need his name so we can find him and bring him in for questioning," the officer said to her. Helena looked out the window, as he drove her home, "I don't know his name..." The officer stops infront of her house, and opens the door for her, "Home sweet home miss, have a nice evening." She gets out of the car, and walks up the front steps to her apartment, Anton watches her from across the street.

As the police officer drives off, she walks inside, and double locks her front door. Helena also makes sure that all her windows are locked. Walking into the bedroom, she takes off her clothes and changes into one of her black silky nightgowns. Helena walks back out into her living room, and turns off her lights, when Anton speaks in a low voice, "Hello Helena.." She runs for her bedroom, but Anton grabs her by her arm, "Let go of me!!" she screams loudly.

Anton wraps his arms around her waist, holding her tightly as she struggles to get free. "Please Anton, I thought you were my friend!" she yells. He pins her to the couch, and looks down at her covered chest, "I want to be more than just your friend Helena!" Anton moves his hand up underneath her nightgown, touching her inbetween her legs. "Anton..." but before she could finish, Anton puts his finger up to her lips, "Shhh," he says.

He rips the top part of her nightgown, exposing her breasts, massaging them with his hands, as the rest of his body weighs her down. Anton leans down and bites into the outter curve of her breast, drinking her blood. She moans, trying to push him off of her. He stops, looking up at her, as he slits his wrist, and forces her to drink his blood. Helena cries in agony as her body dies. "Don't fight it my love, it is only your body that dies..." Anton whispers to her.

After a min has gone by, she looks up at him with her bright blue eyes. Anton smiles down at her, and picks her up, kissing on her breasts as he walks into her bedroom, laying her down onto her bed. As he gets ontop of her, someone knocks on the door, "Helena!!" a female voice yells. "Fuck!" Anton shouts, and gets up. He walks over to her front door, and opens it. The women looks at him,.."Well, well, well, who are you?" Anton smiles and walks towards her, "Your worst nightmare..." he says and sinks his fangs into her neck, draining her body.

Helena waits on the bed for Anton.

Anton walks back to where Helena is, and gets overtop of her. Helena kisses him passionately, as he continues to massage her breasts. "Take me, Anton," she says in a seductive voice. He slides off her nightgown completely, and takes off his clothes as well. Anton slides into her, and makes love to her, continuing to kiss her deeply. Before he is done making love to her, he whispers in her ear, "I have gotten what I've always wanted..."

She smiles at him, and they fall asleep, forever eternally bonded.


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wayne
wayne
19:30 Jan 13 2008

you ake your stories very addictive and you have me now im under your spell i wait for you o come and take me bury yur fangs deep in my neck as tou hold me firmly in your embrace








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