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Dark Fantasy Chapter 1

13:23 Feb 15 2016
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I am tired, not that I need sleep. I am tired of life. I have been alive for millennia, I have seen nations rise and fall, peace then war then peace again in a never ending cycle. I have lived long enough to see many friends succumb to temptation and turn to the darkness. I have been forced to destroy friends who I called brothers. I will not do it again, and I will not risk forcing others to destroy me! For centuries life has been grey and dark I can feel the dark urges growing with everyday that passes, I will not be able to resist the darkness for many more risings. The only hope I had was to find my lifemate, the light which would save my soul from an eternity of darkness. But after centuries of searching I am out of time. Today I will end my bleak existence. I will greet the dawn. It is 5am I should be preparing to go to ground. But not this day, this day I will watch the sun rise for the first and last time in my life. Today I go to meet my maker. I leave my mansion in the twilight of early morning, the first wisps of blue are visible in the east. I am going to walk up into the mountains and find a nice secluded spot to watch the sun rise. As I am walking out of town towards my appointment with the dawn I walk past a beautiful garden full of plants and flowers, of course everything is just grey to me, I have not seen colours for centuries. I notice a beautiful woman tending the gardens in the coolness of the early morning. I watch her, she is petite with long dark wavy hair almost down to her waist. As I watch her from the shadows I feel a stirring in my chest, what is happening? I have not felt this before. Then she starts to sing, her voice is beautiful like an angel. It enchants me, I cannot concentrate on anything but the wonderful voice. I am enthralled. I suddenly realise that the world is no longer grey, I can see the green of the grass, the blue of the sky, and the wonderful rainbow colours of the flowers in this garden! What has caused this? Is this woman..... No she can't be.... Can she? Is this my lifemate? Is this who I have spent centuries looking for? I keep watching her so intently that I don't notice the burning on my skin. As I am staring at this vision of beauty I suddenly notice the first rays of the sun rising over the horizon. Oh no the dawn has arrived, I have found my lifemate, I don't want to greet the dawn!! I am too far from my mansion to make it, I need to find shelter now. What can I do, where can I go? Then I remember there are some caves in the canyon behind this woman's house, they are my only hope. I leave the wonderful garden and run as fast as I can towards the canyon, the rays of the early morning sun are burning my skin as I run faster and faster. There it is, I can see the cave. I reach it just as the canyon is flooded with the bright early morning sun. I follow the cave as deep as I can looking for some cooling earth to heal my burned skin. As I get deeper into the cave I find a patch of rich dark earth. I wave my arms to open the earth, I float down into the cool depths. Before I close the healing earth over me I think of the beautiful woman in the garden, is she the one I have been looking for? What is her name? I will need to wait for the sun to drop before I can find out who she is. As I close the earth over me and sleep my last thought is of that beautiful enchanting voice, the voice of my lifemate.......


COMMENTS

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GingerPop
GingerPop
15:25 Mar 04 2016

Hauntingly beautiful.





ladyfae
ladyfae
22:18 Mar 11 2016

Lovely! ^.^





Morganna777
Morganna777
16:23 Mar 17 2016

**Sigh**





XbluesandX
XbluesandX
14:29 Mar 22 2016

More please...





manymoonsdance
manymoonsdance
05:26 Apr 14 2016

I love this story and i love the gardens.





manymoonsdance
manymoonsdance
05:26 Apr 14 2016

I love this story and i love the gardens.





LadyZombie
LadyZombie
04:57 May 24 2016

Groovy :D





HiddenDust
HiddenDust
10:26 Jun 11 2016

This is an intriguing piece so far. You should continue writing, from one author to a nother... Found this interesting. Also the flower thing makes me smile since it hits close to home for me. Let me know when you write more, I would love to read it.





QueenofHeaven
QueenofHeaven
14:14 Jul 07 2016

This sounds very much like Christine Feehan's Dark Series actually. I used to collect her novels. She has Carpathian vampires (which they don't turn into vampires unless they give into the dark), and they seek, as you put it, Lifemates. Same thing, they cannot see colors etc, until they find them.





8of9
8of9
04:05 Sep 05 2016

Haunting. And very nice to see this kind of writing from a male point of view.





Beth1971
Beth1971
13:07 Dec 30 2016

I love this story.





FrankensteinsBride
FrankensteinsBride
07:11 Jul 25 2017

And.....





Elizabethbathory33
Elizabethbathory33
15:26 Jul 30 2017

Great start





Kataryia
Kataryia
14:01 Sep 05 2017

Good lord ..gave me goose bumps ..but only ONE way this story can end ..





GlacialMoon
GlacialMoon
11:32 Sep 06 2017

Keep. Going what's. The womens name.





Minde
Minde
21:17 Sep 19 2017

I like this





badgirl14
badgirl14
04:24 Sep 26 2017

wow u really the story teller





AlexusAna
AlexusAna
06:09 Oct 31 2017

I love it





LuvlySwan86
LuvlySwan86
10:35 Nov 16 2017

Nice.





AlexMystique
AlexMystique
12:10 Feb 08 2018

beautifully written.. I could visualise it





Darkangel1876
Darkangel1876
03:39 Feb 11 2018

Perfect





darkangel1
darkangel1
17:10 Jul 09 2018

I'm positive your life mate is happy to still have you around





Singlemomchica87
Singlemomchica87
02:52 Nov 04 2018

I love that story he wrote one for me as well I love it sighs 😊





Mrsimpaler404
Mrsimpaler404
03:56 Dec 07 2018

Beautiful and a lovely story





MissHall0ween
MissHall0ween
23:41 Mar 30 2019

Sounds like the dark series from Feehans,novels.





EmberMoon
EmberMoon
04:44 Sep 20 2019

Very nice...





VioletShadows
VioletShadows
18:38 May 18 2021

.........you must enjoy keeping your readers in nearly-painful anticipation..





SnowMantle
SnowMantle
08:01 Jun 12 2021

Still liked that story:)...








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