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Currently, I have a novel I have been writing for 3 years. I have some of it posted in my journal, and I need input people! I want to know what people think, what I should improve on. You know? Please read it, and message me your suggestions. The novel will be called 'The Blood of the sun'

To be honest. I like it as it is, very well written don't change a thing..

Thank you for your compliment.

I agree leave it alone it is very good the way it is.

Thank you Radu. Your insite is helpful.

hi. i love your story. will you have a look at the beggining of mine? its in my journal to.
thanks

Thanks, sure I'll have a look at it. ^.^

thanks
will you post your responce here or message it to me?

Already did that. lol ^.^

i will have to agree, leave it. let me know when you are done i would love to read it all.

Alrighty then. I will continue to post more and more of the novel until I have no more to post, or until I get more written.

:) sounds good

as promised ill have a looksie soon ;)

Sounds interesting....

I d say it is really good written, If youll change it now, it wont be like it should be!"!!

Thank you for your insite Thera.

i thinkyou should leave the way it is

looks good to me ;)

Thank you both for your compliments and reviews.

just let us know once you're done so I can go ahead and read it

Looks good,as I am a fellow writer as well

when's it gonna be out?

Well, I only have 40 pages on the novel so far. I am taking it slow. I know. SO, I couldn't tell you when I am done.

Thanks for the compliments on my story, it's still in the working process, I won't change too much of it, I'm going to be adding details in certain areas, and other sorts of grammar checks.

I do not know when my book will be out, but I will continue to keep everyone posted.

I hope I get a signature copy! :D

To tell you the truth, I want to be mysterious. I don't want anyone to know who I am. I think after I get my novel out, I'll simply disappear. I think people can forget what I look like. ^.^

lol when am i gonna read all that? i will eventually but give me time lol

Fun!

♥ it.

i will take a look at it and let you know.

I'm glad you hearted it th3 crow, and I hope to hear back from more people. ^.^

If anyone has any questions about the book, characters, or anything else. My msn/email is on my profile page. Aim name is mrsbrightshine, and yahoo id is shy_artist_17. Do feel free to contact me!

Leave it honey, it's great the way it is

Thank you for your compliment Marius.

Alright, I thank all for your compliments. I will continue my posting in the journal, if you are confused by anything. Feel free to leave a comment here or send me a message. ^.^