at microfiction...
feel free to provide all
the critique you want...
aaaaalllllllllllll comments welcome...
in my journal under stories...
i swear it will only take 5
minutes to read the whole thing!
:)
100% of everyone who left
a comment say it's funny!!!
:)
give it a shot!
they were cool , added you to my fav journal can do the same with mine if you like .
...thank you for taking the time to
read and comment!
:)
i will add you, etc...
great you have come a long way keep it up added you to my journals stop by and visit mine
...lord, i have subscribed to your
journal since those first shy days here...
you were one of the first to reach out
and say hello...
:)
...well, this is just embarassing at this point...
:)
my other thread was pulled because
i have this thread up...
but i added a super long poem to
my journal...
okay...
this is my only post now to try
and advertise for my profile and
my journal and this bit of fiction i
was working on, even though i
am completely unable to edit the title of
this thread...so i'm going to post until
this one is shut down and just
start aaaaaaaaaaalllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
over again...
:)
and yes, that is the dayquil talking...
Bones edit: If you'd like the title of this thread edited, message a Dominar to have them change it.
I wish dayquil worked like that for me. Check out www.zoetrope.com. It's free and they have a Flash Fiction wing where you can review other's work and have yours critiqued. There are also private rooms, easy to get into, for prompts and reviews. Not all the writers are great, and not all the reviewing is superb, but there's enough good feedback to sharpen your skills in this area of writing if you're serious.
…Bloodmother you shame me with
your generous response to my tantrum!
:)
thank you for the sweetness…
i'll check it out straight away...
:)
you rock out loud!
have a groovy friday...