Fallen angel in my bed
The halo has fallen from her head
Fallen angel in my bed
Beside her lies a demonic past cold and dead
Fallen angel in my bed
Into the night the mortals have fled
Fallen angel in my bed
Into my grale her crimson has been bled
Fallen angel in my bed
The smell of her perfume has dizzied my head
Fallen angel in my bed
All her inhibitions have been shed.
Fallen angel in my bed
Tonight the future has been bred
COMMENTS
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IRideHard
23:08 Dec 21 2010
oh DAMN! That is beautiful JC.
KarminaTheDarkAngel
23:24 Dec 21 2010
vERY nice JC lucky Angel !
NanaKiki
23:37 Dec 21 2010
Yes she is...
xNxPurgatoryx
23:39 Dec 21 2010
Not a bad gig if ya can get it. A Fallen Angel in bed with Jesus? Wow...
tattooedmommy
23:48 Dec 21 2010
damn good...i like it
xSatansAngelx
23:57 Dec 21 2010
very nice JC I guess that answered my question...lol
xNxPurgatoryx
00:40 Dec 22 2010
Which Fallen Angel
From Heaven Fell
To be wrapped in love
By Christ's big Swell
foxglove
00:40 Dec 22 2010
Well done, JC... I totally loved it.
jesse
03:17 Dec 22 2010
tite Lo!
GrimmySoul
08:47 Dec 23 2010
"Fallen angel in my bed
Beside her lies a demonic past cold and dead"
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Wow this is lovely and so poetic. Such rhyming schemes you used. JC I think you really catptured something beautiful
Alastriona
23:43 Dec 23 2010
I've enjoyed your poem, JC. Very well written.
GreenFantasy
00:05 Dec 24 2010
this is beautiful! I love it!
ResidentZombie
00:14 Dec 24 2010
Dang, I didn't know a fallen angel could do so much! LOL
xxWiccanxPrincessxx
01:22 Dec 24 2010
Sweet mother of Jesus that was awesome!!! ;)
deringerdan
01:26 Dec 24 2010
You didnt have to write about me bro.. but i am glad you did.. that was awesome ;)
damn maybe that wasnt for me.. i stopped being an angel many moons ago..
6JESUS6CHRIST6
01:29 Dec 24 2010
LMAO Dan if you keep it up I will have to make you one of my fallen angel stamps LOL
deringerdan
01:32 Dec 24 2010
fallen angel that landed on the moon ;)
LadyElizabethGreyson
01:46 Dec 24 2010
Such beauty to describe such a wonderful love...
Your poetic heart
Your descriptive verse
Truly splendid, Mr. Jesus.
vamplez
04:00 Dec 24 2010
Very moving ;)
KynthiaLucian
01:42 Jan 20 2011
you are so talented JC!!!! I love it!
charmedwolf
03:35 May 10 2011
amazing!!!!! i love it :-)