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Fallen Angel In My Bed

22:58 Dec 21 2010
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Fallen angel in my bed



The halo has fallen from her head



Fallen angel in my bed



Beside her lies a demonic past cold and dead



Fallen angel in my bed



Into the night the mortals have fled



Fallen angel in my bed



Into my grale her crimson has been bled



Fallen angel in my bed



The smell of her perfume has dizzied my head



Fallen angel in my bed



All her inhibitions have been shed.



Fallen angel in my bed



Tonight the future has been bred


COMMENTS

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IRideHard
IRideHard
23:08 Dec 21 2010

oh DAMN! That is beautiful JC.





KarminaTheDarkAngel
KarminaTheDarkAngel
23:24 Dec 21 2010

vERY nice JC lucky Angel !





NanaKiki
NanaKiki
23:37 Dec 21 2010

Yes she is...





xNxPurgatoryx
xNxPurgatoryx
23:39 Dec 21 2010

Not a bad gig if ya can get it. A Fallen Angel in bed with Jesus? Wow...





tattooedmommy
tattooedmommy
23:48 Dec 21 2010

damn good...i like it





xSatansAngelx
xSatansAngelx
23:57 Dec 21 2010

very nice JC I guess that answered my question...lol





xNxPurgatoryx
xNxPurgatoryx
00:40 Dec 22 2010

Which Fallen Angel

From Heaven Fell

To be wrapped in love

By Christ's big Swell





foxglove
foxglove
00:40 Dec 22 2010

Well done, JC... I totally loved it.





jesse
jesse
03:17 Dec 22 2010

tite Lo!





GrimmySoul
GrimmySoul
08:47 Dec 23 2010

"Fallen angel in my bed



Beside her lies a demonic past cold and dead"

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Wow this is lovely and so poetic. Such rhyming schemes you used. JC I think you really catptured something beautiful






Alastriona
Alastriona
23:43 Dec 23 2010

I've enjoyed your poem, JC. Very well written.





GreenFantasy
GreenFantasy
00:05 Dec 24 2010

this is beautiful! I love it!





ResidentZombie
ResidentZombie
00:14 Dec 24 2010

Dang, I didn't know a fallen angel could do so much! LOL





xxWiccanxPrincessxx
xxWiccanxPrincessxx
01:22 Dec 24 2010

Sweet mother of Jesus that was awesome!!! ;)





deringerdan
deringerdan
01:26 Dec 24 2010

You didnt have to write about me bro.. but i am glad you did.. that was awesome ;)



damn maybe that wasnt for me.. i stopped being an angel many moons ago..





6JESUS6CHRIST6
6JESUS6CHRIST6
01:29 Dec 24 2010

LMAO Dan if you keep it up I will have to make you one of my fallen angel stamps LOL





deringerdan
deringerdan
01:32 Dec 24 2010

fallen angel that landed on the moon ;)





LadyElizabethGreyson
LadyElizabethGreyson
01:46 Dec 24 2010

Such beauty to describe such a wonderful love...

Your poetic heart

Your descriptive verse



Truly splendid, Mr. Jesus.





vamplez
vamplez
04:00 Dec 24 2010

Very moving ;)





KynthiaLucian
KynthiaLucian
01:42 Jan 20 2011

you are so talented JC!!!! I love it!





charmedwolf
charmedwolf
03:35 May 10 2011

amazing!!!!! i love it :-)








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